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I have probably read this story thirty times over, but it is always a pleasure to read it again. Not many people make Axel the innocent, and really i quite enjoyed it. I always wished there'd be sequel, maybe with punk Axel action, but I digress. This story is wonderful and is one of my all time favs, thank you :)

This was exactly what I needed to perk me back up after... well, you know. Even if I read this one when you first put it up.

(also, I totally forgot I'd already reviewed this once. Whoops.)

That ENDING! Loved it! You totally like, took everything I love about Akuroku and put it into a story! Ooh! Ooh! My favourite line was definitely: 'Roxas was almost about to shout fuck your mom', I was laughing my head off and couldn't stop reading it over and over! Thanks for writing this! It's amazing as always!

Wootz! Sexy, hot, and AXEL is playing the innocent church boy this time. It's rare to find those. Nice!

Oh mah Gawd! Axel being cast as that innocent was just so cute! And so unexpected! alsdkfjaldskjfasdfffhjwe;fj I want my own innocent Axel... He's so naive and I love it.

This was fucking amazing. I saw how it had so few reviews and just had to tell you how amazing it was.

Oh my gosh, this was great :) I loved how this time Axel (Lea, whatever) was the prude and naive one in the relationship. It was an interesting angle and I loved it. I especially liked the ending, where Axel got his tattoos :) it was great

Are you going to continue this? ITS AWSOME!