I know it's been a few years but I honestly don't think you can screw it up and if you did I honestly don't care. You are an amazing writer so keep writing...unless you got tired of it and moved on. ;

I love the story and I actually imagined I was Rachel. Because you know I have a huge crush on Randy Cunningham ever since I watched RC9GN. So yeah, can you hurry up and update already?

I would kind of want a something that would make me incapable of speaking for some reason.

Nice job

Love your story, but hurry up and update. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

Please make more! I love this too much!

celui qui a écrit cette histoire devrait en faire un livre c est genial

I can say you are a great make stories better than I could ever.I just hope the next chapter comes out soon still take your time so it doesn't turn out me well...I can't continue my story... anyways this is so fare one of the best stories I have seen in a while.

Ok, i think ur story is great and your right that there are some grammer or spelling mistakes or whatever, and those matter, but dont take so long to write, if u have an idea, just go with it, dont think about it just let your mind unravel. Believe me, this works, my english teacher taught me this and it really worked out in the end! Just go for it!

I dont mind if I wait. But dont take like months and months to make one chapter. But please take your time because if you rush a chapter the story would start to become lame and so far this story is really interesting and makes me want to continue to read it non-stop

It's cool :)

Honestly, this story is a lot better than you think it is. Randy is a little OOC, but there's a reason no one's accused Rachel of being a Mary Sue (other than the fact that she isn't one): THE STORY IS GOOD. Especially the first few chapters.

Take your time to write a next chapter. I know that feeling while writting something quite important ('I'm going to screw up that' - I used to think while I was reading my own story in hopes of ending it. Well, I didn't.). But, hey, the most improtant thing is that we (the readers) know that you didn't stop writing this story (I hate when very good stories ane discontiued, but somehow I make it alive for some fanfictions).

I think it is my longest review ever ;)
Greetings from Poland
ViVi :)

It's okay! :)
I don't mind waiting at all!
Honestly, with my main fan fic...
I take MONTHS to update it! (In general) :/
So don't worry too much about it, and I will wait patiently for the next chapter! :)

I love it ,keep going i want to see what happens(by the way i read the last one and still waiting for more.)

It was good and that u need more
romance.