| Reviews for Of the Pack |
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PurpleNightwing chapter 1 . 11/3/2016 are you going to update its November 2016 |
Guest chapter 9 . 10/26/2016 How Alpha training a beta dose they have a schools so they could train betas sexually How the world works alpha only see betas omega noting but toy so they can pleasure they alpha mate Dose beta omega have any right in these world the world they live in dose not make sense it only have sex |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2016 These is stupid dose not make sense at all of all the characters Billy is the only one that act humans |
Guest chapter 7 . 10/25/2016 I don't mind Dick have he baby but for Some reason Bruce sure froce to kill wally baby |
ShiroNeko102 chapter 13 . 4/22/2016 Please update, I LOVE this story and can't wait to see what is going to happen next! |
Yip chapter 13 . 3/31/2015 Hello I you haven't updated lately. Are you studying, working or sick? If you're studying or working don't forget to eat and sleep early so you have enough energy. If you're sick don't forget to drink lots of fluid and some chicken soup even if you don't like it. (PS I don't like chicken soup) And don't forget in life it's also important to have "Me Time" or "Time for Yourself" whether it's relaxing on the couch or having fun outside. Hope to hear from you soon. Sincerely Yip |
FangirlingSoHard chapter 13 . 3/8/2015 Okay, so I've read everything up to chapter 13 and absolutely LOVED this story but I have just one problem concerning with Dick. With every relation that he's been with, it's always failed. Let's name the 5 people that mated with him or that he liked(?). There was Bruce, Damian, Jason, Billy, and Slade. Yeah, none of them lasted a day with him. Everyone but (Haha butt) Jason (I think) has mated with him. Or in other words, had sex with Dick. Let's start of with Slade, shall we? Okay, I get the whole 'I'm pregnant!' thing was just to add to the plot, and I liked that but then, there was Jason and then there was Tim and then Slade almost died. Well, uhm, okay, I'm cool with that. Yeah, that just sort of happened. Now, Damian, on the other hand, he just used Dick. It wasn't even pleasure until he felt guilty. In short, I'm not even sure Damian even really liked him in the first place. Now, Bruce. Yeah, it was a one time thing. Only to turn the baby so it wouldn't be Slade's. That's it. No relation, just to add on to plot. Mm, Billy. I thought they had a thing because of the, 'I'm going to make you feel real good.' thing. Yeah, haha, no. They had sex, that's it , it's done, over, gone, goodbye, next. Ahh, Jason, I actually thought he would be a great mate for Dick. PLOT TWIST (Not really, but..)! Guess who has a soul mate now? Yeah, Jason, that's who. But it's not with Dick, it's with Jojo! Now, apart from Bruce and Jason, guess what the other three all have in common? Ding ding ding, you got it, Tim. The one, the only, Tim Drake, the most sexiest omega there is. Wow. I was kind of guessing the whole 'Tim has all the attention!' thing solved on it's own, but apparently not. I'm guessing it was only put in there to add to the plot. Damian had sex with Dick. WHATEVER MUCHACHO, NOBODY EVEN WANTED HIM ANYWAYS, GIVE ME THE TIM. Yeah, Damian is jealous. For Tim. Billy is added in to be Damian's rival (For Tim I'm guessing.) WHATEVER CARRASO, FUCKED DICK, BEEN THERE, DONE THAT, I WANT THE TIM. Love rival? No brainer. Unless plot twist maybe? Oh, Slade. Got Dick preggers. Showed him Jason is not loyal then proved that he, himself, was not loyal either. Beat up Dick, check! Now time to get my hands on Tim and nearly rape the omega. Seriously, what IS Tim? An ungodly sexy omega who has the body that says, 'Fuck me, I want you, I need you.' written all over him? If not, then the whole attention thing wasn't solved at all. I don't know why it was even put in there in the first place. Plot purposes? If it's not going to be solved, then I don't see the point. Even so, Tim STILL gets all the attention. And Dick is just left to give birth and name the baby Terry and only THEN Tim tells Bruce that he's pregnant. Is this story mainly just focused around him? Because nearly every chapter has Tim in it. Wow, I get it Damien, calm your boner for him. You too, Billy. (Though there is no evidence that you HAVE put Billy in there to be a love rival for Damien, I'm just assuming for now.) I wonder who's the father, is it Kon? Wow, another relation to add onto Tim's long list of mates. (I don't remember but I think it was Kon who also had sex with Tim?) And then, you released that Damian is Wally's mate?! What happened to your huge boner for Tim? They just don't disappear like that. That whole problem with Dick and Tim did not resolve and I'm hoping that it later will and Tim's mates will reduce to one and Dick will EVENTUALLY, SOMEHOW, find himself a nice mate. Dick is just right now, still alone forever, it seems. Well, I'm sorry but this was my rant about that one problem. I still love your story nonetheless but try to calm the raging boners for Tim and give Dick at least ONE love that will actually stick? Then again, you don't need to. A response is fine with me as well. I just want to know if these boners for Tim will eventually lead to something good(?). |
Wulf chapter 10 . 2/9/2015 I just love love love the Damian and Billy interactions. Please do more of them. |
Guest chapter 13 . 9/18/2014 Joy to the world! Damien and Wally are togethe! Now add Tim and Connor and Damien will have a little pack of his owne. :D Clark is still strong even though he's at Omega. Which is why his grandma made him take the special pills to seem like an Alpha. Knowing that people would see it as a defect and he'd be most likely's scientist interested in then an mate. That and she did what I had the family business to anyone. (sly old grandma) When Bruce trying to make him stay for dinner (convince him to stay and interrogate and find out what's this nagging feeling Bruce can't stand not knowing anything) Clark is getting tired of politely refusing his cell phone goes off it's Luis is calling to worn that Luther is coming to him. Confuse Clark ask how is he coming to if doesn't know where he is? Then the doorbell ringing and when Allford goes answered would you behold it's Lex Luther. Then being rude as he is go straight to Clark and asking why he has not excepted having a private meeting with him. Clark just fed up with his attitudes his grandma said to always be a gentleman in the worst case scenario he calmly talk to Lex Luther to get him to leave he doesn't want him to see Connor worried that he might somehow recognize him and apologizes to Bruce for his intrusion. How will booth handle this rude Alpha intruding and his home (especially went to a his omegas have baby's and one is pregnant) I can imagine Damien not being happy with a strange Alpha in his home near his pup. XD Connor and Tim talk excitedly about the baby and Clark. Tim happy of having a baby he's worried because he doesn't know if the baby is Connor or Damien. Connor promises to protect Tim regardless of who the father is. Changing the subject Tim ask Connor if he thinks at Clark is true mate? Connor replies that it's not a true mate at Bond there's a bond but it feels like family. Wally is surprised how over protecting and caring Damien is being. And he likes it but he gets very flustered when Damien calls him beloved. (I know it's really corny but I feel it so Damien something he would say to his Omega one of the few things that shows he's his mother son) I also think it be funny and cute if Damien was worried to hold his own baby or any baby in general. From always being rough never having to be gentle he seriously worried he's going to break his own child. Determined to get that thought out of his head when they're spending family time in the living room Damien on the couch where Wally he promptly deposits their child on his chest. Damien tenses his body immediately worried that he'll break his child somehow. Irey sensing her papa chirps happily at him (The chirping noise is so cute I got the idea when I heard a baby cheetah called it's mother) surprised that his pup so content to be with him instinct takes over and Damien does a deep rumbling that sounds like purring (I imagine that alpha have different kinds of rumble there Felt through the body then through sound and each Alpha has a different pitch or tone.) I imagine Damiens tone being so smooth that knocks in their bodies begin to unwind and the whole park turns into a relaxed state. (PS. Sorry if their's any bad spelling and bad grammar I haven't leave the comment work is hectic and I was really stressed lately your story as always make me happy so thank you.) Sincerely Yip |
epic21donuts chapter 13 . 9/10/2014 God dammit Daimian... |
faluna chapter 13 . 9/10/2014 i still dont get it... how is james mate or the person bruce aproved as mate? becouse he was a stranger not his bro heartly |
RobinLover4Ever chapter 13 . 9/9/2014 OMG! lolz, everyone is pregnant! Keep up the awesome work! I really enjoy this story! XD |
REBD chapter 13 . 9/7/2014 Aww is conner going to be a daddy and what about James and hartley |
Yip chapter 12 . 7/28/2014 Simply amazing. Dick complain about the pain of going labor. Tim in between a growling Damien and Billy is simply hilarious. And Wally going into a coma as if Leber wasn't hard enough. I have a question that's been nagging me in the back of my head. If a beta are stronger than on omega why breed with an omega at all? And for that matter if an alpha can breed with another alpha why breed with a beta or omega? I hope my questions are not too hard to answer. Sincerely Yip |
Guest chapter 12 . 7/21/2014 OMG! Please update! |