Thank so much for posting this story! I can tell that you put a lot of work into this, and we are so lucky to have people like you writing in the fandom.
I thought I wouldn't like this story, cause it's set in an early 20th century insane asylum in America, which is (hands down), one of the most depressing places to live since the dawn of time. But, you made it really work, but kept the sadness and despair of the place intact. I really loved that!
I only have a small critique. I get the feeling that as the story went on, it became a little looser, narratively speaking. Like, the story was pretty tight at the beginning. Things seemed to be happening one after another, with a clear goal in mind. It seems like in the later chapters that the story loses a bit of focus, and becomes a bit more rambling. I feel like the last three chapters could have been condensed into one, and the story would have been no worse for wear.
I absolutely love the relationships in the show. Putting Rachel and Santana in there (as a broTP) really makes me happy, and they're so well written. Simon is such a despicable villain, I can't wait to see Santana wipe the floor with him. And Quinn and Brittany's relationship is tortured and confusing, but sweet.
Thanks again for writing, and I can't wait to read more! (Chapter 15).

This is the most interesting story I've ever read. Your point of view is so stylistic and unique. Excellent job. I can totally visualize everything that you describe. It's dark and foreboding and awesome. I gather that you're busy but I truly hope that you're able to finish this. I'm so glad that our girls are finally reunited. Kudos to Quinn for that. This chapter seems like the calm before the storm. I'm eagerly anticipating Santana's last showdown with Simon. One of them will die and I hope that smug bastard gets what deserves. Thanks for sharing your talents with us!

A wild chapter filled with action and intrigue. I'm happy quinn and puck help them

I'm soooo confused. Some parts are brilliantly written but there's so much description of everything and super vague threads to hold it all together. Maybe I'm not smart enough to read this?

Omg i loved this chapter! The ending was perfect! Brittany ranting about "i watched you died over and over.." and Santana pulling her in for a kiss! And the "i will always love you the most" line ugh perfect!

I love this update. Santana helping Rachel out was great,and I'm always lol'ing at everything rachel says. Also, my Brittana heart beats! Thank u for the update :)

Yay you updated and yay Brittana reunited. Awesome as always

I loved this chapter for obvious reasons. Things are looking up! Side note: I laughed out loud when Santana was wondering how she ended up between Quinn and Rachel in the car.

you're back! loved the updated and can't wait for more!

15/17. That is crazy, lady. Very proud of you for posting after a zillion years. It was worth the waaaaait. Great job, gurl. Loooove you.

the site is being weird and trying not to let me post a comment, but great job. exciiiiiited.

yaaaaay did the brittana riots bring you back to life? thanks for posting. :DD

That anon leaving negative reviews needs to gtfo. This story is fucking great and if they don't enjoy it as much as they should, they need to go away.

Great chapter. I"m so happy Santana and Brittany are together again! :)

You're finally baaaaack.
What kind of wild ride are we talking about? Like death or death-defying? Haha.
So glad Santana is back! I was really scared for a little bit.

Oi. I'm scared for their safety. Amazing chapter though. Keep up the good work. :)