wow! ilyk it!

You're story is so good. I love it! I really wish you would have finished it. It was getting really good.

OMFG! LOL! This story is absolutely hilarious! I love it! I love it! I love it!

Whew... That out of my system... Common sense would dictate that Joey would be a better choice after Seto's deception, but Seto developed feelings so he should be given a chance. In the long run, Seto would end up the more lonely person without Jesse, so I say that she should hook up with him instead of Joey. Who knows...Maybe Jesse's got a friend from the Deep South (nudge, nudge) that Joey could get together with. - But anyway, regardless of your dececsion, please continue this story to its end! -

Go KAIBA! I know he lied to her, but you have to understand what it would be like if you were orlando bloom trying to walk into a mall and having 50 fan girls go after you. I mean, can you help it if you want to talk to someone heart to heart? And it was none of Joey's damn business to get involded if the problem. Heck, there's a bunch of girls out there who'd date him.
that character reminds me of me. I'm mix. I work at a stable teaching young riders and taking care of the mounts. And I'd probably leave both of them if they did that to me.

Je parle Francais et Anglais...
Shadow: Huh?
Me: I said I can speak french and english...but I was born in America.

Hey I know the story is old, but it rocks. I was wondering if you could possibly updaye it, I understand if you dont want to, but I loved it!

Nice work
-Danielle

*Pouts* I really don't like Joey.
*Growls* Poor Seto. If only he wasn't so self-confident.
Icing :P
Well written. There were a few typos, but other then that, the accents were really good!
Icing :P

c'mon there get it together kaiba and joey need to explain themselfs with jessie without the other there so their not trying to kill each other,u gatta get kaiba ang joey explanin what they did n why so that joey can go out with jessie,and mock kaiba about it .and kaiba can suddenly have realised that serenity is the girl for him (no foolin here)and start going out with her (not just to get own back on joey but cos he really likes serenity)HEY waida minute i just gave you an idea,oh i hope you take it into account that would be so cool bibi
russle

c'mon there get it together kaiba and joey need to explain themselfs with jessie without the other there so their not trying to kill each other,u gatta get kaiba ang joey explanin what they did n why so that joey can go out with jessie,and mock kaiba about it .and kaiba can suddenly have realised that serenity is the girl for him (no foolin here)and start going out with her (not just to get own back on joey but cos he really likes serenity)HEY waida minute i just gave you an idea,oh i hope you take it into account that would be so cool bibi
russle

Hurry up and updatw, will ya!

This is a great story!

This is the best Kaiba/oc story I have ever read! U have gotta keep writing even though I know ur situation. it was explained in your outlaw star fic that u don't have internet where ur living. But please do update this story if u can. Really soon. And I love Joey to death but I think that Jesse should end up with Kaiba. He needs someone to warm his heart. He needs to discover love and felling and most important of all he needs to get a life!

Please contiue the story. I want to read more of it. and please make it a Kaiba and Jesse fic.

Hopefully this isn't the ending, but if it is, it's a good way to lead to sequels. I enjoy your Jesse fics [can't stand yaio, sorry] and I hope another rolls along. Later!

good!

LOL! *laughs* Hm I didn't see that will there be another chapter?