Reviews for Whose Jersey?
JC chapter 1 . 12/27/2019
FRED!
SakuraLove24 chapter 2 . 7/3/2016
Charlie
Guest chapter 2 . 5/7/2016
Charlie
Ron chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
I thought Ron because they wear the same size
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
ron
killer4853 chapter 3 . 9/12/2014
update it
Rita Arabella Black chapter 4 . 10/30/2013
I've always liked Hermione/Charlie together? Nice one.
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 4 . 10/28/2013
cute
SerialBookworm55 chapter 2 . 10/26/2013
charlie
SerialBookworm55 chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Charlie
greyspotterfiction chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
CharlieHermione :)
Please continue ;D
klt1 chapter 4 . 10/25/2013
Love this. Please update soon
paranormal insanity chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Charlie! I always like this pair
ASiriusWriter01 chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
This chapter was dry, short, and rushed. Vary your sentence structure, add more character interaction, add more details, and build up some tension. I'd suggest you rewrite the chapter to make the story more appealing. If the first chapter isn't strong, most people won't give the story a second glance.
Illa 321 chapter 4 . 9/7/2013
This was rushed. It would have been nice for things to happen at a slower pace... Maybe doing a bit of a flashback to how they got in a relationship in the first place?
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