| Reviews for Whose Jersey? |
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JC chapter 1 . 12/27/2019 FRED! |
SakuraLove24 chapter 2 . 7/3/2016 Charlie |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/7/2016 Charlie |
Ron chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 I thought Ron because they wear the same size |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2014 ron |
killer4853 chapter 3 . 9/12/2014 update it |
Rita Arabella Black chapter 4 . 10/30/2013 I've always liked Hermione/Charlie together? Nice one. |
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 4 . 10/28/2013 cute |
SerialBookworm55 chapter 2 . 10/26/2013 charlie |
SerialBookworm55 chapter 1 . 10/26/2013 Charlie |
greyspotterfiction chapter 1 . 10/26/2013 CharlieHermione :) Please continue ;D |
klt1 chapter 4 . 10/25/2013 Love this. Please update soon |
paranormal insanity chapter 1 . 10/24/2013 Charlie! I always like this pair |
ASiriusWriter01 chapter 1 . 9/8/2013 This chapter was dry, short, and rushed. Vary your sentence structure, add more character interaction, add more details, and build up some tension. I'd suggest you rewrite the chapter to make the story more appealing. If the first chapter isn't strong, most people won't give the story a second glance. |
Illa 321 chapter 4 . 9/7/2013 This was rushed. It would have been nice for things to happen at a slower pace... Maybe doing a bit of a flashback to how they got in a relationship in the first place? |