your spanish is awesome and it was alright

It's a good story. I think Shelby should come back though. And do you edit these before you post them?

Lol! Rachel's new attitude.

why so you do song at the end of your chapter

keep going (
is someone going to find out what her dad to her?

good chapter can't wait for more

You really need help with your grammar. It's a cool story, but being dyslexic, I can't keep up. Sorry

this was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more.

gotta love alittle more drama

brittberry friendship
no pregnancy

I think she should move in with Santana and I think that she should get pregnant and then have a miscarriage. I know that sounds bad but that could be very interesting to the storyline.
Ps. This is a good story

Woah

If you do make Rachel pregnant. Santana should know first. /no matter how much Rachel tries to push
Santana away, Santana won't let her. I don't really like Jesse. I have no idea who I would choose as new friendships. Also still don't like Shelby

this sucks. You aren't using basic grammar. Your dialogue needs a little work, too. But most importantly, you rush. You want to depict a scene, and you rush to get there rather than building it up. I hope you are 14 and not a native speaker of English. That is the only excuse for this mess

Update soon please
One of the best I have read
I love ur stories