Personally, I like Scolie.

PLEASE tell me they find a way to deal with Mason soon? He's been giving them shit for 24 episodes and thats more episodes than a season- please get rid of him! Can't wait for the update :)

That whole casual conversation they had so that now they're dating thing was, I don't know, kinda unrealistic to me. I feel like if she really liked him she would be freaking out. Maybe more detail would've made for a better description of how she felt at that moment or how she feels about Scott because I'm not entirely sure how much she likes him. I thought they were just kinda friends with benefits and now they're dating.

This chapter was funny. The point of view you use is kinda confusing and I meant to write that on the other chapters. Like you should switch the point of view to third person instead of first when Natalie isn't there to witness the events because it's confusing otherwise. I still like the story though so... I'm gonna keep reading.

you have major repeating at the end of ch 1 you should probably look at and fix

Wow. Talk about a cliff hanger...very nicely done with these last two chapters

I can't wait until your sequel is up!

I love this story. Nat is so funny, and I just love the way as interacts with the boys. I hope you write more!

Hahahahah oh my gosh I loved that Lydia part and Stiles saying "Oh my god Lydia, you just can't ask people that". Great chapter! You're an amazing writer xxx

cool story plz say you are going to continue on this :)

Haha and yay I missed youuuu

Dun Dun DUNNNNN

Awwww! So Adorable

I love the story! Thanks for making a Scott/OC story, I was really wanting to read a good one and here I stumbled upon this beautiful gem! Keep up the awesome work and can't wait for the next update!

OMG I NEED MORE