I just imagined the JonTron 10 meme but with Fred and George

Still one of the best and few good harry potter fanfics,epic tale and fun to read,you are a legend.

Well lancer is obviously Elizabeth Bathory. A kind of obscure historical figure, well done. Shows some character originality not usually found in Fate fanfictions

I dont think you know what hair to the floor means.. He's 11. You're writing a kid with 4 to 5 feet on freaking hair...

this is getting little too close to genderbending for comfort... i hope my mind will process this better after some sleep. 3am is not a good time to read a long/plot intense story like this.

water for hot chocolate? Blasphemy!

really though... That whole Malfoy contract thing seems kinda unnecessary...

Amazing story. This is One of the best Harry Potter fanfiction. I love it. You are amazing writer.

Harry pulled of his own... Magic Law! (mixture of Magic burst from dragon quest and Fairy law from Fairy tail)

It didn't transform. The boggart is "sheet ghost" shaped.

I want to like this story, but I honestly feel like he's giving out too much information. He's saying a lot of things he doesn't need to. I guess that's just a peeve of mine that pushed me away from this story. Like Harry, Neville literally never asked where you went. It just makes Harry feel pretentious. I know he has people problems, but just the way Harry's dialogue is just makes me want to go aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. I just get put off by the weird, TMI, awkward dialogue. It's a good story, just hate his dialogue and his internal narration.

can you make stories based around those other dimensions the prana went I would love to see them especially the one where he was adopted by a veela coven

Regarding your headnote comment "... I’m afraid to say that Naruto is not being considered for two reasons: One, I don’t like it myself and I don’t think I could do such a story well, and two, there are far too many Naruto stories as is, some other stuff needs lovin’." While the first point is valid and sufficient on it's own, I see the second point as a bit disingenuous.

If the sheer number of extant in-universe stories is something you find daunting, why the heck are you playing with the HP-verse (780k stories and 48k declared crossovers on this site alone)? In comparison, the Naruto-verse is a far-distant second at only 408k stories and 35k specifically-declared crossovers. At 824k and 443k total stories, that's nearly twice as many HP stories as there are Naruto stories, so there should be "far, Far, FAR too many" Potter stories as well by your reconning. ;-)

In both cases, the numbers ignore actual story content and reflect only the counts given in the site's Category browse filters with all settings unrestricted.

Regarding "It was mind-numbingly boring, and honestly anti-climatic," I have to ask (picture Dr Scratchansniff addressing Yakko on couch) "vhat is zis antagonism you have vith large scale weather systems, a.k.a. Climate?"

I hope you're not one of those folks who can't say "anticlimactic" to save their life. I swear, as common as that malapropism is, it's every bit as awful as the idiots (and I include a couple of Idiots-in-Chief) who constantly prounounce the word "nuclear" as though it were (phonetically) "nuke-yuh-lar." It just shows the speaker/writer in a very bad light to make such glaring mistakes in vocabulary.

Regarding "Acting as advisor and defendant of the accused: Amethyst Stheno Velvet.”

You've abused that term more than a few times already. Do you appreciate what the "defendant" is? It's the ACCUSED, in this case (the local) Harry, himself.

As for Amythist Stheno Velmet, her role in the proceedings would be that of Defense Attorney, an Attorney (first and foremost) who DEFENDS the accused Defendant. In Britspeak I believe they refer to this role as that of a Barrister, one who defends the accused before the Bar (the assigned judges and, if necesarry, the jury of ones peers).