Awesome! This could have been a short story all on it's own with different dialogue and character names. Not saying that's a bad thing, just saying. Oooooo, I loved this!

Great job! I love how you incorporated parts of the movie into a completely different setting! It worked out very well! Loved it!

Love itt! Continue please, some action, some hurt, more love and brotherly goodness! :D

That was so cute! I loved it.

Very interesting AU; a refreshing read :)

Aw that was sweet!

A very fun premise! I loved the banter. Loved the bus scene with Chuck leaving and how you adapted Herc's "my son" line. Made me laugh. :)

Great story! I love the AU with the coffee shop. I can totally see these characters in the roles you gave them! :)

AND EVERYONE LIVED! HUZZAH!

I loved joining the short yet entertaining story you've made here. I forgot to mention this: this unique AU of yours is fun! Might try it when school lets up.

YANCY. Lol.

Epicness in a Cafe. Well done :D
(Just wondering but did that bus... you know, mysteriously pull the same trick the giant robot did last time Herc said that?)

This is so fluffy and beautiful I don't even know how to handle it. Aw man, this chapter had me grinning and laughing all over the place. Thanks for writing such a sweet fic. I just loved it.

Oh wow! I didn't know what to expect when I began to read this, but I really enjoyed your story. It was great, and I loved all the connections to the movie it had, so the AU parts of it felt justified. Keep up the good work!

Um... it ended way too quickly.

FINALE ALREADY!? NO! ;_;
WHY DOES CHUCK AND RALEIGH GO AWAY LIKE THAT. YOU'RE NOT GOING TO KILL THEM OFF ARE YOU!? NO NO NO NO NO. THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME. I CANNOT WAIT. I NEED CHAPTER 5. Please end it with justice. _;

Nice choices here. Instead of gigantic kaiju from the sea we've got a multinational conglomerate with little regard for environmental justice. It's time to save the neighborhood. Huzzah!