this is wonderful
i love the interactions between the first six when they're not fighting

That was an interesting perspective

Lol XD
I love this!3
I really should finish hw, shouldn't I... School starts soon... like 2 days...

Heheh, you're right about the possibilities of a six-way bromance forming here. We get so invested in the demigods that we forget about the gods themselves, but you're right about the traumatic childhood thing. Great story! This was very well-written, very original, and very interesting! Keep up the fantastic work! :)

I love this, the interaction between the Elder Gods. Zeus should show this side more often...

Aww! I love brother-sisters relationships! This one-shot was awesome! You should write more about them (the gods, I mean).
Love it!

Can I have your creative wonderful brain? I need it for my stories. :DDD

Poseidon calling one of his rambles great. Huh. Maybe they were in for miracles.
Or maybe Demeter had just pinched him. Either or.

Hahahahaha! That part at the end was great...actually I loved the whole story. I liked how you showed the bond between them that I dontthink anyone actually shows (or writes about)

It was an AWESOME story :D

This was very deep and a great take on the subject. I've always had a hard time thinking of the gods, but you made them seem like caring, amazing people now. Perfect.

These six really have the potential to be interesting characters.

XD
Demeter totally pinched him.
THAT WAS SO AWESOME! It made me deliriously happy to read that. Good job HecateA

You're right, the fandom did forget about this one! Nice job!

You're right. It was a little unusual. But I kinda would've never expected this from Zeus, being so protective of his brothers and sisters.
But I'll never stop reviewing cuz your my writing role model!

I don't know how you do it, but every story of yours is amazing. This is no exception. The gods disagreed about many things, but every one of them cared about their children... This is perfection.

Ello Mello,
I should probably clarify this. Lol, I'm a total girl with curves and everything. Secondly, THANK YOU for this. I had to read this two times over to make sure I didn't lose anything, and even then, I'm sure I missed some stuff. How you can fit so much in a thousand plus words still amazes me.

Anyway, this was a good one-shot. A real good one shot that I assume deals with the premise of Kronos actually winning, or gaining an upper hand. Nyah, the world sounds its gone to the dogs. -winces- And these powerful gods, to see them like this, makes me wince. I never really think of them like this. I place them on a pedestal, but here I was reminded of their childhood spent in a stomach. Ouch, my feels. I just wanna hug all of them.

I love Hestia and Zeus in this. Hestia because the little lady is just awesome. Zeus because, well, I've never seen anyone that has written Zeus like this. The King God that is actually caring, has a heart, and cares for Hera. Really, it is really refreshing.

I definitely liked this little snippet.
You're writing was amazing as ever.
Keep up the good work, dude. Thanks again.
Hooray for angst!
Byez.