Please update this soon this is really good.

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

Practice getting better at writing. You need better grammar. For example, in one of the paragraphs talking about Sakura’s dad in the beginning of chapter 1; the whole paragraph was one sentence. That is not okay.

Aww look he's learning the value of forgiveness. While everyone is insulting his parents, and threatening his family, he must learn to forgive. That's right, ching chong ching chong ah you must learn the value of forgiveness ching chong.

Go fuck yourself with that bullshit. Matter of fact, you can forgive me while I rape the life out of your cunt mother. Hehehehe

And another thing is zero tails there is not or you talking about the juubi

To be perfectly honest it's sometime confusing to read

You are a fag.

Fuck you asshole.

Gross

Holy shit how many people if you gender bend and why do I not hate it

Good story, some good executions, but you made him too strong too fast. And Kakashi attitude with Sasuke, come on, your gotta be better than that. Also, Kakashi tried to kill Rin, seriously, get out of here.

I don't normally like this kind of but I admit this one is growing on me to bad you quit writing it. Must have more please update!

F all of the above

Continue please , its spectacular

Reading your story...I see someone named Naruto an arrogant weakling.

You described practically portrayed as an arrogant weakling, but not Naruto himself. But in true, it is Naruto.

Still going on and on, trying to convince everyone that he's hot shit. Well, ya know what it's convinced me of? It's that you're more of a pathetic bitch than I originally thought. Ya wanna know why shitty Naruto Gary Stu lasted as long as he has have? It's because everyone, for whatever asinine reason, seem to be convinced that he something to be feared or lusted after, though who knows? Maybe he had to brainwash them, too, thinking it'd be able to keep them in line? But whatever the reason is, you wanna know what happens when someone actually sacks up and decides to take you on? It turns out if you decide to challenge him, the big, awesome badass precious image melts away, and in its place is an arrogant piece of garbage who constantly boasts about how he's such a goddamn badass while spending his time hiding behind his toys and genes like the pussy that he is.