Oh my! I loved it this ending would be cooler ... Buy I still like the fight with unbelievable playing. But it was awesomeness at its fineness good story

Please let there be a sequel!

Post "the royal countryside2 " pretty pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?

maria is funny
great chapter well done

so far great

This is my absolute favorite Keelykelly story. I just love this. It's utterly perfect. *Sigh*

I say this is better than what happened in the movie! :D

OOooooh the ending was perfect!

much better than the movie,but loved the movie too to me it was something like cinderella
Barbie:louis goes to ask corrine (out of every girl in the ballroom) to dance but is stopped(sort of) by two girls sabotaging each others chance of dancing with him he of corse choses nether and asks her to dance
Disney:prince charming goes to ask cinderella(out of every girl in the ballroom )to danced but is stopped by her step-sisters who were also sabotaging each others chance of dancing with him corse choses nether and asks cinderella to dance
See what i mean,maybe you could write a fanfic of barbie and the three musketeers like cinderella (still with the girls becoming musketeers) its just a thought :)

how about this:-a month before louis pops the tittle on her they were taking a ballon ride and when they got back to the palace jameston re-intuduced louis to Anne of australia right in front of corrine then the next day anne whines because louis isn't taking anne on a ballon ride like he is with corrine so anne drags louis away every time she catches him with cori,louis just thinks she is a clingy girl but the girls soon find out she never liked louis she was pretending because she wants to be queen louis just denied it but soon regrets doing so later when he hears her talking to jameston about the plot to take over france soon they get thrown in jail ,louis says sorry to the girls(especally corrine)then two weeks later he pruposes to her and they live happily ever after (its all i could think of)

what about this for a sequel:-well about 2 months before louis decides to pop the title only he could give her, a certain Anne of australia shows up because of jameston ( XD )Anne pretends to be smitten
only because louis is a king,and every time louis tries to talk to corrine she drags him away,while louis thinks she's just a clingy girl the girls find out that she is evil louis didn't belive them so he decided to ask anne so she puts on the innocent act and to keep louis and corrine meeting she sends her cousin to distract/woo her with his charm and soon louis finds out that they are evil and instantly
regrets not beliving the girls especally Corrine and they get thrown into prision and later luis pops the title on her (its all i could think of,and sorry for my horrid spelling)

Umm...what was Double Trouble?

keelykelly this was amazing as usual and someone should make your barbie fanfictions movies or episodes or even webisodes! i like it enough to animate this and ill try! :D

keelykelly this was amazing! corrine's 'double title' was perfect! only if france saw and herd what aramina said XD :)

Awh... Adorable story.