First off, I love this story. Is was so caught up in the battle scenes esp. when Draco broke his leg, I couldn’t breathe.

I am confused about something. Earlier it was explained that Remus was injured and in something like a coma, but when Neville and Draco are talking about Hermione leaving, you have Lupin there with them. Did you mean Mconagall? She’s there in the first part of the scene but never mentioned again.

Anyway both stories are superb.

Oh oh oh Omg Thank you for giving us the Harry-Ron-Draco dynamic we all deserved! Like this was just the most beautifully written fanfic that opens a conflict and resolves it the most beautiful way. And oh I can't my heart is too damaged right now. I love you and I writing is really really for you. You touch people's lives with your worlds and ohh you make make our hard times better in your own special way.

I...just...can't... Omg it's finished already! I feel so damaged, so full of love, so full of everything! The Risk verse is everything a Dramione fan could ever ask for. It's full of everything that will make your heart thump and jump from your chest and melt your heart to pieces. The way their love for each other was presented in this story wa sso beautiful written, that it radiates through the words. You can feel their love as if your part of them. Oh, Merlin. I can't even start how perfectly written this Draco was. Risk Verse's version of Draco was the most real, most raw I've ever read. And think I won't be able to find another story with this kind of Draco in it. It makes me sad and happy at the same time. That's how your Draco affected me. I also love Hermione. She's my everything! I wish I could love like her. Oh gosh, while reading this I almost actually forgot about deathly hallows, I almost believed that this was the canon one. Omg you left me broken, and happy, and sad,... Everything. I hope I'm making sense and and I hope this review reaches to you because I want to let you know how great of a writer you are. And you've touch my life until my very soul. I know if 5 years late and I can't imaging living my life not knowing this story exists. Try hoping for a sequel. I... Thank you and omg I can't... I can't let go of this. Noo

"It struck him suddenly, dizzying and too good to be true except that it was, and emotion made a hard ache in his chest."

Does this mean this is not real? this part sounds like ch. 1 when Hermione realizes that she's dreaming about their life.

Exquisitely crafted story

this story was absolutely beautiful and heart wrenching and ugh so much angst but full of so many sweet moments of friendship and love. you did an excellent job of capturing the complexity of their situations and emotions, and i’m so happy that everything turned out okay for draco and hermione. even though it’s been a few years, i hope you’re doing well and will return one day to write a sequel where we get to see their child grow up and how they deal with their relationship in the public.

Merlin damnit! ! This 2-fanfic series was rather brilliant! I loved every-every word of it! The whole plot is written so damn well! I don't know what else to say...but really, it's awesome. And I loved it. A lot. Keep writing!

Words can't even express how I feel after reading this highly detailed, amazing story. I've read both in about 4 days and I'm stunned. You did an amazing job and I hope that someday you will decide to write the sequel, although where it ends is satisfying enough. Thank you for this roller coaster ride of a story!

please, god, write sequel.

I have no words to describe this other than phenomenal and amazing.. I had to step away around the middle of this I just couldn't handle the raw emotion before Draco was rescued. I literally am up till 330 am just to finish this.

What an amazing story. Good job.

Such a hardi but wonderful story ! I lobe it, great characters and a geniune plot.
I hope that someday you will brin Axiom to life

Thank you for this story

Damn, that was some hard reading. The PTSD is strong for everyone and everything is still so raw.

Argh! The PTSD is real and more havoc just appears out of the woodwork.

I just finished reading the Risk-Reward and then this in an obsessive three-four day read. I don’t know if I have words to accurately capture how amazing these works are. They are dark, brutal, heart-wrenching, touching, hopeful, and beautiful. I love how expertly you wove the elements from the HP stories into them. And the brutality of war was just stomach churning. These works will stick with me for a while. It so accurately shows how dark war is and how it just does not go away. Your writing is so on point. I can’t believe I get to read this for free. I am glad I could read this all in one go as opposed to installments because I do not know if my heart could have handled the waiting between chapters. Really really really well done works. Thank you for writing and sharing with all of us. I just loved your Draco and Hermione characterizations... so much.
(I would love a second epilogue to find out if they ever, finally get a somewhat settled life.