| Reviews for Behind The Scene: Omiai |
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Soul Raider 116 chapter 7 . 7/18/2017 ROFL! I love this twist! Btw. I want to point out that your writing has improved since the other fics in this series. I'm very glad I've stuck with you! I wanted to read True Reflections and Next Episode before diving into this one when it popped up during a Yashiro story search, and it was an interesting experience. You have shown very great potential since True Reflection. Your grasp on story structure and detail was immediately clear, and I could tell it was more advanced than many people I have encountered both online, and in person. This got even better with the next story. The one issue I spotted in those original stories was with spelling, homophones and clumsy phrasing. In this fix,you have done much better in that aspect! It improves the flow as well. I may be rambling, sorry. And sorry if I seem rude or like a know it all. I have learned recently I can have that tendency, and it's something I don't always realize I'm doing in the moment. I'm trying to be more aware. And this review could be a bit stuck up sounding, I guess? I'm not sure...please let me know... |
Guest chapter 6 . 9/19/2016 Come on update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update And longer chapter please n thank you |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/25/2016 You know the drill it's time past time for update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update |
BB71 chapter 6 . 6/4/2016 Gentle reminder please update as soon as you can thnx so much |
setogirl2 chapter 6 . 9/6/2015 Ok, That Cracked me up real hard lollllllll Please continue soon I love this story and yashiro. |
PaulaGaTo chapter 6 . 8/25/2015 Me gustó...pobre Yashiro...tienes que encontrarle una buena mujer! |
PaulaGaTo chapter 4 . 8/25/2015 Jajaja aunque me gusta la pareja Kanae/Yashiro |
PaulaGaTo chapter 3 . 8/25/2015 Jajaja |
PaulaGaTo chapter 2 . 8/25/2015 ESta muy entretenido... |
Lady Lily Anne chapter 6 . 8/25/2015 Thank you! Wow, that was so long ago that I didn't even remember requesting this until reading the dedication. You did justice to the scenario. Thank you for updating! |
PaulaGaTo chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 EXCELENTE...QUE BUENO QUE PENSASTE EN YASHIRO! |
Star chapter 5 . 4/20/2015 Amazingg I cant help wanting more... Update Update haha |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/18/2015 You're back! Yay! i've read the stories accompaniment to this and it was AMAZING! anyway, I'm hoping you'll update this once again. Reading this is really fun! Hoe more inspiration comes! |
claraowl chapter 5 . 4/17/2015 *laughs fiendishly* Poor Yashiro. He deserves it. XD |
TheUndeadQueen chapter 4 . 9/17/2014 Oh gawd. Please please PLEASE! Tell me there's more. I love this. Poor President. But my Yashiro-sama should not date all those women. Please I beg you write more though. This was way to amusing. I also really liked "The Next Episode" :) |