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Like the Pied Piper

Was she dropped on her head as a child? I've never imagined that someone could make such poor life choices on a constant basis.

SO MUCH LOVE 3 ~~~~

*slow claps as tears run down my face* This story was so beautiful. It always kept me at the edge of my seat and the fluff from the romance made me fangirl. So many feels I felt while reading this. This was a work of art. Bravo! *claps with gusto* You deserve an award.

No it isn't for whatever reason people on seem to hate ocs in general the first chapter or so were slightly rushed and if someone only read those it would seem you were writing not only an oc story but a marysue as well the fact that you put oc in the autors note as plural could add to it despite the fact that all ocs excepting kaori are minor or her family however as the story developes kaori is shown to be a funny and naive girl her character is gradually developed into being an overall well rounded and likeable person you also did a very nice job of keeping sesshomaru in character as well as beleivably caring and likeable which I have found few other authors are able to do I like how you stick to the story of the series but did not simply make it a reread/watch of the series with your oc thrown in basically you did a really good job and no it is not bad

I like it. Read it til the end. You're really good. It's short but really enjoyable. Keep it up! :)

Good story.

Seems interesting so far, but the mix-up between first person and third person confuses me at times. It's really bad in the first part of Kaori's POV, but gets better as the chapter goes on. What does she look like? It would be nice if you added some descriptions of Kaori. The only thing I know about her is that she has the dog-demon trademark - golden eyes. I don't know if she has brown hair, black hair, short hair, long hair, or shoulder-length hair. It would be cool if you could edit this story, to fix some things and add descriptions to it. :) Another thing, was that it seemed to move a little fast. Not as fast as a lot of stories I've read; this one was bearable, whereas others I just couldn't stand at all. I've only read the first chapter so far, but I'm going to continue reading on, because I AM interested in this story, and I'm also eager to see if your writing gets better. :)

So sad that its over! This story is one of my favorites!

No! I really like your story! Whoever added it to the "worst Inuyasha stories" is silly. I think it's really good :) I've gotten this far in the story in less than a day.

Fucking no lemon story...Hmph! I'm mad... its not that difficult to write a lemon... *brawling my eyes out* meany!

Please please please tell me that Sessh is much much stronger than Inuyasha and him pushing Sessh back was a fluke...a stlword of their father's fang is not, should not be enough to make them equals in strength...! He is the killing perfectionist! He should be one of the strongest demon alive...

Awww! I really loved this story. Besides a few grammar mistakes here and there, I still liked the way this story was written. I liked the plot you had. I'm glad I got to read it to the end :) it was a cute story and I'm glad that Kaori got her happy ending

This was a nice read. Really liked it. Also you said you started watching Hetalia a while back... .. who's your favorite character and who do you ship!?