Reviews for What's eating him?
I'manerd chapter 9 . 9/8/2019
I believe *pushes glasses up* the fire spell you are looking for is 'Incendio'.
AquaEclipse chapter 23 . 11/8/2018
This is a strange story, and not the best-written, but not bad.
TaekwondoAssKicking chapter 7 . 5/30/2016
This story strongly reminds me of a videogame ... the plot, goals, item finding, the characters ... how the thing is playing out ... Am I the only one?
Guest chapter 23 . 1/30/2016
The Native whitchs, were they supposed to be skinwalkers? That's the only thing I an think of like that in that area. I went and looked it up and almost freaked out when my laptop finally got the image loaded. Their not as bad as a wendigo, but still. They. Are. Freaky!
Guest chapter 23 . 10/10/2015
Woah
Just woah and wow
This was very beautiful and suspenseful
fullofcrazyness chapter 17 . 5/18/2015
XD RIDE THE LIZARDS INTO THE SUNSET THAT SETS IN CAMELOT XD BEAUTIFUL!
mangofeeesh chapter 23 . 9/3/2014
You should definitely write a sequel.
quadraticutie chapter 17 . 6/27/2014
To Camelot! ...On second thought, never mind. 'Tis a silly place.
quadraticutie chapter 9 . 6/27/2014
Do you, by any chance, read the Harry Dresden books? I don't know why, but it kinda feels like you were referencing it.
Mx Gone chapter 23 . 5/14/2014
Ooh...I like your idea of them being much older than they are.
And I love how England told America that they needed to have a little talk later. XD haha
DaintyDiana chapter 23 . 5/13/2014
I love how you ties the navajo code talkers in, that was rather clever! I'd love to see a sequel, but don't really have any ideas :/
OctaviaWorks chapter 8 . 5/13/2014
We don't get dust storms much in Las Vegas, but they are sons of bitches
OctaviaWorks chapter 2 . 5/13/2014
Are you going to put a link up to the game when it's done? Also, great chapter!
lovino01 chapter 22 . 4/26/2014
Its a really good story but it kinda lacks answering some questions.
Rani-Girl chapter 22 . 4/18/2014
Wow. Given the type of story, I wasn't expecting much. But that was actually funny, exciting, and quick to catch and keep my interest. Minus a few grammatical errors here and there, it was great!

But I don't understand; what's America and Canada's connection to all of that?
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