This is great! I know its been years but I hope that you'll consider continuing it at some point... I cant wait to see what happens with natsu and how he shows the regret over what happened between him and gray and how gray comes to terms with what's happened with the help of his friends and family to help.

That story is AWESOME! It's totally on my top 10. Please update soon! I wanna (need to) know what happens next

I really hete sed endings so can you please make this story a happy ending please for natsu and gray and everyone and us please

please continue Speak politely to an enraged dragon please I preacheate it so please continue this chapter

continue?

Oh, that was heartbreaking. 3 Though, wow, this fic is intense. I was hooked from beginning to end. I love it!

Will you continue this someday? Would love to see more!

Thank you for sharing!

I know it's been a few years but I hope you decide to update this it's fantastic.

Wow, this was quite a ride. It's been a while since I've felt this strongly for a story. My desire for Natsu to be torn to shreds burns strongly.
The torture was realistically written, and you didn't forget any of the things that happened to Gray, which is excellent. I loved the role you've given Loke and Lyon in the process of Gray's recovery. Their characters are overlooked quite often when it comes to Gray in favour of Team Natsu.
Now... I'm well aware you haven't uploaded this story in two years or something, but I really, really enjoyed it. Of all the dragon mate stories, this one is the most fleshed out. And the fact that you've taken rejection into the account is what really makes your story unique. Also, I'd argue that the inclusion of violent physical and mental torture helps to make it stand out. That being said, there are a lot of unresolved plot lines that I'd really like to read.
Gray's recovery for example. Or a focus on how Erza handles the situation. And Natsu getting the beating of a lifetime by Lyon. And of course the fact that there's obviously something wrong with Natsu and that his redemption arc -if there's ever going to be one- could take interesting turns. I suspect one that has to do with Igneel. The way you write Natsu beating himself up over what he did is nice to read, but also quite sad.
And how the fuck this is going to become a Natsu x Gray story, haha. Everything between them is so fucked up now, I can't imagine it ever being alright
Really, there's a crap ton to work with and I really hope you get into this story again!

Also, I read on your profile that you're from Belgium! I'm from the Netherlands. Are you from Vlaanderen or Wallonië?

Right now I want to strangle you, but if you update then you'll be fine. UPDATE PLEASE, I have to know how this story ends.

natsu: bites into shoulder swallows blood
me: i REALLY need to stop reading vampire fanfiction...

ya know i think this natsu would have E.N.D shaking...

...ummm...yea R.I.P gray it's the E.N.D of the line for you

I read about half-way through chapter 7. You have a really good writing style, but I can't say I enjoyed this story past gray becoming Natsu's mate. After he rejected him and it went the way it did, I couldn't continue reading it. I was looking for a little angst, not this. However, many people seem to like it, and power to you for being able to make it for them. I'm sorry to say I wasn't able to finish it.

Read the authors bio looks like she/he isn't giving up on their story's just going to finish them all at once. That's the life line I'm holding onto. Looking forward to reading it when it's completed. ;)

It's been 1 Year and 7 months as of today, Sunday February 26, since the last update. I'm gonna say this stories been abandoned but I'll still check to see if it gets an update every other month. Beings that the last update took 7 months I was already beginning to think that the next update would take even longer or not come at all which is ok either. It was a really great story tho, don't get me wrong I'd jump at the new update but it's very unlikely. :(