Writer has no idea where this plot is going. Just keep writing no matter what the outcome or how much disorienting the story is. Suck. Disappointed.

Gosh. Well come back and tell your story when you can because it's pretty damn good. Strong plot, supporting plot, crime written well.

I'm a little confused because it seems like there are inconsistencies in the the way the characters behave,,,not just inconsistent with the way they are on the show but inconsistent within this story.

I have a hard time connecting with Rick, as he is so harsh and impulsively mean. I cant imagine he would say those things about Alexis, or yell at Kate and leave without saying goodbye.

I really don't understand what you are trying to do with this story. You are writing the characters so OOC that isn't really enjoyable to read. Rick would never talk to Kate like this, and he would never talk about Alexis in such a negative way, Alexis would never act the way she is acting, and Kate has more spine, she would force Castle to listen to what she has to say.

This story is kind of a mess plot wise, I hope you clean it up fast, because it is getting harder and harder to read.

I loved this chapter, please update soon.

Poor Kate! Rick is being so stupid about not letting Kate in and yelling at her! Is Alexis doing those things because she's in her wild child phase or is there another reason? It's a great story by the way!

Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update more frequently than once a week?

Update ASAP! I wanna read the whole thing. Please? :)

I loved this chapter, please update soon. Also, please update very frequently, I can't wait for more.

Wonder what's going to happend now!?
-A

Great chapter

Oh, boy... LOL

Wow kate is a bitch. Talk about overeacting big time. I have just lost so much respect for keeping such a big thing from Castle just because he kept something from her. Talk about juvinile. Please have her grow up in the next chapter.

! The case part and how castle was well done and in character. Im not able to write a correct case thing so i admire those who can! Be careful, though, not to explain too much but to show what happens instead with scenes and dialogues. It makes the pacing story a bit fasterand it seems more real! Glad you wrote that idea we talked about on tumblr! Btw im heartincages on ffnet but i couldnt log in on my phone so lol. Keep writing!