Reviews for To Tame a Magus |
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Lord of Moons chapter 1 . 8/10/2019 You do realise there was an actual Shinji route planned, where Shirou teamed up with Shinji. He also wasn't actually the one that abused Sakura, those bruises where from the unformed the command seals. It's actually quite funny how wrong fanon got it. |
Rongis chapter 4 . 7/4/2017 Everything about this story is pathetic. |
dzk87 chapter 7 . 5/19/2014 Oh wow. So this is brilliantly done. That the Einzbern also exist in this world... too good. |
Zarkinator chapter 9 . 12/1/2013 I've liked the story so far but I do have a few observations. I'm not sure if you're aware of this, but the familiar bond actually warps the mind of the familiar in a subtle fashion to make the familiar form an emotional attatchment to the master in the ZnT universe, to the point that they find themselves incapable of deliberately trying to harm their master and being willing to risk their own well being to protect their master. In addition, I feel like shinji is being unusually stupidly antagonistic towards everybody. Yes, FSN reveals him to be a horrible little monster in every route, but he only let his true nature show through when he thought he had the upper hand, and didn't try to burn bridges until he figured out he never really had any chance at securing alliances. I feel like a shinji who knows just how vulnerable he really is in a world where magi aren't restrained by secrecy wouldn't risk antagonizing any mage that could kill him when he knows his ability to defend himself is probably limited to a mystic code or two. |
Fimbu1vetr chapter 9 . 11/25/2013 GO SHINJI! |
Fimbu1vetr chapter 8 . 11/25/2013 OH SHIET lol |
Fimbu1vetr chapter 7 . 11/25/2013 OH SHIT Einzberns vs Shinji kun with friendmaker I wonder who will win!? |
Fimbu1vetr chapter 5 . 11/25/2013 Kirche loves that passsion! |
Fimbu1vetr chapter 4 . 11/25/2013 GO SHINJI GO! Being Shinji is suffering |
Fimbu1vetr chapter 3 . 11/25/2013 LOL Louise dueling Shinji? Oh boy |
Fimbu1vetr chapter 2 . 11/25/2013 GO SHINJI with ur book of the great attendant hahaha |
Fimbu1vetr chapter 1 . 11/25/2013 OH SHIET ITS SHINJI KUN. All he needs is a friendmaker from the holy grail hahahah |
Androgynous-Heron chapter 9 . 11/6/2013 nowwwww its super interesting! and omg I wanna see them in the castle of horros/alchemy/pure mother fudging gold/eizbern castle. shinji would be panicking... like a lot. is this a paralel version of the family or did they just move worlds, like a branch of them moved to another world. I'm pretty sure they can achieve that much with how much knowledge they have... |
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 9 . 11/6/2013 It seems this one is rather inferior to Ire and Ilya... or didn't have the benefit of company of normal people (if Kiritsugu can be called that)... his expressions and mannerism reminds me strongly of Sai. So... some Einzbern got sucked into a Second Magic phenomena (not surprising, considering Sucker was also involved in Heaven's feel) and started a "Dynasty" here in Halk. Now we only need a Tohsaka to complete the set. Did Warde just hire Mathilda to handle our dear homunculus? He dpes not seem to realize those weirdos come in their dozens... heck, even Ire came from a pile... |
Seeker213 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013 You summoned the asshole sister-raping douchebag Shinji of Fate/Stay Night as Louise's familiar. Congratulation you made me hate the Familiar of Zero series in one chapter be proud. Also in the words of Sarge from Red VS Blue, you could have picked someone more capable like a turd or a turd farmer |