This isn't a bad story over all. However the huge chunks of lyrics do nothing for the story. In fact, they detract from it. I found myself skipping the lyrics in favor for the much more interesting text that you were writing. I liked the plot twists you had with Vicious and Faye's pasts. I liked your characterizations so much that I could hear Steve Blum and Wendee Lee in my head. I like this story well enough to recommend it to others I just feel that it is in your best interest to remove the lyrics.

wow, i can't believe that this thing is almost three years old. i love it, though. it's honestly one of the best spikexfaye fics i've ever read. i'm so glad that i stumbled upon it. nice work, even though the end was a little abrupt. it tied up all the loose ends, but it was abrupt. very good job, overall, though.

why'd you only get 172 reviews for this? your story was great, i think your story deserves atleast 500 !

anyway keep up the great writing, it's amazing how you just tied everything together, probably one of the greatest AU cowboy bebop fics i've read.

Hahaha, well, it was interesting to say the least. XD

It was pretty good. Liked the part with Vicious and Faye, haha. I thought those parts were pretty darned funny, but I have a weird sense of humor, and partially sadistic, but don't mind that. :)

So I really liked it. Lots.

Atfirst I thought it seemed a little bit corny or shallow or cliche, but as I read more I definantly got more into it and it got deeper, and well better.

I love the ironic humor you've used aswell as the completely random or oddluck seeming situations that pop up through the whole story. Who here can say coincidene, I think not.

I would definantly like to see a sequel, sorry you weren't totally happy with it. It did seem a slight bit abrupt, the ending, but it all tied up nicely and was quite enjoyable. Nice story, let me know if you decide to post a new one/sequel.

Ah! Muffy rocks my world!

Great story, I enjoyed reading it. . I liked how you made Vicious a part of Faye's past. It was an original idea.

Well done!

Wow. This was SUCH a good story. The plot was original, too, and my gosh, at certain parts, I was actually rooting for Vicious to win in the end. (o.O) But all in all, I'm satisfied with the very nice ending, with the yummy Spike/Faye moments. Awesome story. Loved it, loved it, loved it. )

I know you'll probably never read this, but if you ever do, I want to thank you. This story has been the only truly wonderful Cowboy Bebop fics I've ever read.

cool

I...it's just...you know..

And the thing...with the thing...

And you...and the characters!

This is an insanely good story.

Perfect characters, awesome plot, awesome songs, awesome writing...

I just...speechless.

I want to hug you,

10,0 stars out of ten.

-Kathleen

PS: Is there anyway you can send me those songs. They match the story so well...

realy cool story! :)

*sobs* aww it was so beautiful it was sad...i know this is gonna sound really evil...but in a weird twisted way, i wanted Faye and Vicious to go to get her...i know i know, ur prolly like, what the hell...but i did, though i love the whole thing with her and Spike. Really i do, this was absolutely the best FanFic i have ever read, and trus me, i've read a lot of them, so take pride in it, you were great, and it too me 4 fuckin hours to read this damn thing. haha, keep writing, and come check some of my stuff out if you aren't to busy, i'm not saying u have to, i'm just saying it would be nice to have someone like you read it...*Blush* really, you did a wonderful job. I look forward to reading more by you soon!

Sincerely,

DeathIsOnlyTheBeginin

P.S. its nice to know that i'm not the only one who had the thought of Vicious and Faye having something in the past. I have actually been toying with for about 2 months now, but dont worry, i wont take ur plot or idea or ne thing like that, promise!

That was GREAT! So cool! I am utterly impressed because you didn't once comprimise the characters, even the end was brilliant. Most people get to the end and throw in a pile of fluff that has changed the characters around so much you can't believe it. I loved it and think it's brilliant! Thanks for writing it (yes I knew you didn't write it for me! doesn't mean I can't thank you anyway!).

Kimra

I really like the story mabe you could make a sequal to it.