The first part of this story while they are stuck in the time loops was excellent. It was honestly the best part of this entire story, and was very engaging. I was absolutely hooked, and really looked forward to seeing how they would escape from the loop.

The second part is pretty good because I loved seeing the aftermath of them finally escaping the loop. I absolutely adore how close everyone became, and the relationship between Kyon and Yuki becoming even closer was really sweet. I really like how Yuki changed due to having to relive those loops continuously, and I love how while still very subdued, she definitely has become much more human.

Then the third and final story arc was just ok. I didn't necessarily hate it, but it definitely was the weakest of the three. There were a ton of conversations that I just sort of skimmed through because they were lengthy and didn't really amount to much. Tsuruya's role in this part kind of confused me too, because she was set up to be something really important, and then is mostly delegated to background stuff.

I'll definitely be coming back to this story occasionally for that first part though, because it was really damn good.

Unfortunately, if she was degraded so much that she cannot function anymore, after reset she wouldn't be brought back like nothing happened. There would be consequences.

After all, if Yuki were to be brought from backup, not only it means data loss from that loop iteration, but also that either she breaks down soon again (last backup) or she acts as if significant amount of loops didn't happened (some early backup). Of course, in second case they would have no way to know that loop was happening significantly longer than Yuki says it was.

Oh, and claim that Yuki's death would have less serious consequences than her going away on vacation for a week or two is pretty efficient way to destroy suspension of disbelief. It is just too silly.

if this ends with no disappearance, im going to be mad.

I still think they should have given haruhi yuki's suicide note.

Amazing story
Finally got around to finishing this one
Started it a while ago and left off somewhere in part 1
Glad I picked it back up

That was perfect
I can totally see that being the way they start dating

I also like how kyon is challenging haruhi to figure it out herself
Because she would be more inclined to believe it if she figures it out rather than being told

I really like this new dynamic between them all

great story up until you introduced sasaki and company. it just went down hill from there.

i really enjoyed the conversations between brigade members.

I kinda disagree on the some John Smith and kyon expressing his love not breaking the cycle. It's a pillar of the community that it's his Trump card to get her to believe what he says. But I love the atmosphere you got going on here.

...tsuruya?!

And I'm glad that, since you've written them down, these vignettes aren't to be forgotten like the rest!

I'm on chapter 10. By turns heart-wrenching and sweet. You've made great choices on the vignettes to show out of the repetition. I love your portrayals of the characters and how their personalities have flowed over time.

Cute little ending, but for some reason...needs more cowbell.

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Fun chapter. I really liked how the meeting went. I can't wait to read Kyon's meeting with Tsuruya.