I don't understand, it's a god damn good story and no one reviewing it? I can't say much but you have to know, it's masterpiece.

I love PrusAus but can hardly find good one fic, beside deValier and the other authors that i can't type the names because i just can't remember their name, you're one of the best.

Thanks for typed and posted it, even though i don't like the way Roddy cheat, you have great diction and somehow you chose carefully words you about to type.. Hope i can find more from you..

XOXO

Rereading this and it's absolutely delightful and wonderful.

The only thing that would have made this fic better would have been a more detailed scene of Roderich having disappointing sex with Erzsébet.

There needs to be more straight to gay fics

Well for Roderich its bye bye heterosexuality.

Aaaaa, that was beautiful. It's very rare to come across fanfiction that portrays marriage and infidelity in such a mature way, and I loved that. The characterisation was fantastic too, along with the characters' interactions. My favourite thing, though, was the beautiful writing style; the descriptions were, for lack of a better word, so incredibly pretty. I love how you depict Roderich's inner turmoil in such a beautiful way, especially that metaphor about how he is a drowning man and Gilbert is the last breath that will pull him down. The descriptions of Erzsébet and of Gilbert gave me goosebumpsthe blood knight and the barbarian princess'), and every word was just so pretty. Overall, this was a beautifully written, mature and realistic portrayal of one of my favourite pairings, and definitely one of the best PruAus fics I've ever read. Great job, and thanks for writing this!

Good God I love this one. The ending is so realistic and well written. Whole fic was like that. Words perfectly chosen. Gilbert's caracterization was soo good...
Bravo, one of the best PruAus fics there are

I LOVED THIS! This fic was awesome! Just... The interactions that Roderich had with Erzsébet and Gilbert were so intense and AAAAH. It was awesome. And George deValier is awesome. I love him as much as I love this fanfiction.

I don't think I could ever find words to describe a story like this. I would love to write a long long worded review over every single aspect of the writing and plot, but I am unable to. I apologize. Stories like this are very, very rare. Stories that leave you with an ace at the ending. Stories that rise like a crescendo and move so quickly at one point, then fall back at the next. Stories that flow and ebb and drag you under with them. This is such a story. I can't even begin to write how much emotion this story has and the way it makes me, as the reader, feel.

All I can can is thank you and I hope you can know what that means.

Perfect

I cannot stop rereading this. This is probably my favourite oneshot ever and I'm not even that much of a PruAus shipper! I love the writing style; the sophisticated air to it I think reflects Roderich's character brilliantly, and the conclusion at the end is just perfect. I've read most of your Hetalia stories, thank you for writing all of them:') it can be so difficult to find really good writers on this site so finding you made my day _

Ahhh omgsh this was absolutely gorgeous!
Beautiful! I love this story so much you have no idea. PruAus is so my OTP and ahh the angst in this one was phenomenal! And I loved how you portrayed Hungary cause she is actually such an amazing character.
Fantastic job!

I loved the story so much, its definitely one of my favorites. One i thing i always ask though is why Francis went back to Paris

This is really hot and brings alive the agony and the beauty of Gilbert's and Roderich's feelings. Please keep writing for this fandom; your writing style is awesome and I really, really liked how you kept them within character. I wish that you can write a sequel to this, though - reading such a passionate Gilbert and conflicted Roderich finding happiness together would be such a treat!

Between you and DeValier, I think I've finally given into PruAus! I can't fight it anymore with writing like this in the fandom. Lovely piece. You have a very distinct style of writing that's really interesting to read. I hope to see more like this from you!