Reviews for Beautiful Creation
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 7/20/2017
That moment when he felt her and just stopped was so gorgeous. I would have liked to see more of the later months, but this was still really good.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2017
OMG THIS IS SO FUCKING GOOD I DIDN'T CRY BUT I WAS SO CLOSE I HAD TEARS IN MY EYE AND I'M A STONE COLD BITCH THIS IS SO GOOD
XxStellLindberghxX chapter 1 . 4/12/2017
Oh my god! I loved that so much so cute so sweet so perfect such a perfect name for the daughter loved it so much!๑)
Kurisu Mott chapter 1 . 11/28/2016
So cute! I kinda thought they would be a great couple, even though Riin/Haru could be awesome too. I have seen episode 6, and it's funny because of the way the boys pass time.
ChinchillaGamer chapter 1 . 10/5/2016
I have not read a Fanfic this good in awhile thanks for the good read. :)
Lucy H chapter 1 . 5/29/2016
I loved this fanfic. it was the best one i have read in a long while- it had good plot, and not to mention correct grammar, its so annoying when the author of a fanfic has incorrect spelling and grammar. I like yaoi's but im not the stereotypical weeb that is associated with that. This fanfic was super cute and in the fanfic the characters were represented amazingly. 10/10 3333

Thanks!,
Lucy
tokihakaisha chapter 1 . 5/13/2016
There was no shameless fluff in fact it was quite passionate . Well done yo
random-nerd-posts chapter 1 . 4/30/2016
SUPER CUTE! I'm too weak to say no to mpreg stories that are part of my favorite fandoms, and this is amazing. Thank you for this... I really like this.
SugerPie chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
I love it! I hope ya got A LOT of review! because I think this story awesome!
KittyHug chapter 1 . 1/24/2016
Come on! You're killing me with the cuteness, lol. Such a sweet fic.:)
NoahEarlGraves chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
Awwwwww~ This is so cuteee!
wakame daisuki chapter 1 . 9/19/2015
Aaaaaaaaw, it's beautiful~ i'm not into male-pregnancy thing but this is awesome. You did a great job! Can you make a sequel please? Story about makoharu raising their child? Pleaseeeeeee!
Keep writing!
KO13 chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
This was nothing but beautiful, now I really want a baby. Keep up the good work!
YaoiOtaku1011 chapter 1 . 7/19/2015
I loved it!
kichou chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
wow this is so cute, i hope i can hug both makoto and haru #kisskiss
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