Reviews for Untold
zyphoracutie chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
Very cute onestop...good stepping stone for a story later on down the road.
accioweasleys4 chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Aww. This was very sweet!
Meel Jacques chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
At first I thought, "Wow, it was all so fast. They already have secrets because of a kiss!", but then I realized "Hermione is taking the lead." and I loved. *o*
93 Diagon Alley chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Cuuuute :)
Stephanie O chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Neat story idea! :) That's one of those moments where even though it never happens again, it's like a little private moment that you can look back on and remember fondly...I can imagine both Hermione & Fred thinking back on that day for years to come! :)

She knew he wasn't use to girls flirting with him. She knew he was the one who always flirted with him [them?].
Caitlin chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Awe it's adorable! Make me almost want to ship them!
Hp blabblah chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Awesome story!

Heres my favorite characters in order

One - Neville Longbottom
Two - Luna Lovegood
Three - Severus Snape
Four - Fred Weasley
Five - George Weasley
Six - Dobby
Seven - Nearly Headless Nick
Eight - Remus Lupin
Nine - Draco Malfoy
Ten - Ginny Weasley

Favorite Pairings

-Neville/Luna
-Harry/Cho
-Snape/Lily

Hated Pairings

James/Lily
Neville/Ginny (NEVILLE AND LUNA FOREVER!)
Harry/Luna
Ron/Luna
Dean/Luna
Harry/Hermione
alloraventrice chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
I love it and wish you had wrote more of this pairing. Great read. Thanks.