I just have one tiny issue with this story. John dislocated at best and broke at worst his arm when tb 5 was hit. Do gou have any idea how long that takes to heal? My mom had hers dislocated and it took 6 months before all damage was healed. (Granted hers popped back out in week 3 & the idiot putting it back messed up, but still) John wouldn't have been able to pick Alan up yet.

Otherwise: I'm loving it!

This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read

I'm not sure if you take requests but do you think you could do a reaction fic about Alan's braces. Its not mention in the film and I can't seem to find a fic about it. I mean wouldn't Alan need to see a dentist because his braces were yanked out? There should be some kind of fallout from that. Apart from that though I just want to say I love this fic and have reread it several times, its the only reaction fic where they watch scenes from the movie that I can find.

love

Loved it soooooooooooo much

I love this its my favourite short story, especially the older sibling protection, as an older sibling myself I can definitely see this being played out in my family. ;)

Loved it

THIS IS PROMPTING ME TO WATCH THE MOVIE MYSELF!

I loved it!

Love it please write more

I have so lough at the End! I love Alan and he say! But the most I love is about the big brother from Alan. That they want to protect tham.

Awesome!:)

As always the story is awesome. Like all of your stories.

love it

Great story! I loved it, especially Alan's smart comments at the end. Great job, love stories like this and yours is amazing. :)