Cute story.

Gabrielle seems to have changed age once and clothes several times in this chapter.
She was 16 in chap1 , and Fleur says she is 13 in this one.
She started out in boxers and jersey, then was suddenly wearing skirt etc.

Love it!

""Why can't she just be happy for me? For us?" Gabrielle asked softly still watching the crowed."
Because Gabrielle's still underage?

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HERMIONE is comforting GINNY? Hermione's tied with (or closer than) Ron in terms of best friendship to Harry, has strong moral values (and Ginny is not only in the wrong, but blatantly and obviously so), and moreover has a longstanding loathing for Draco Malfoy personally.

Why on earth would she possibly be supporting Ginny over Harry?

Wanted to like it but there were too many issues. How does Harry know Ginny is pregnant? When did he find out about the affair as the story seems to indicate two possiblities, he knew for some time or just found out? They could not be watching Shaun of the Dead as it released two years after you state this story takes place. I could go on.

Beautiful story! Thanks for sharing it with us.

I really like your Fanfiction and I hope you will Update soon.

not bad, I guess, too much romance and the only interesting thing was when they encountered each others and Harry throw them away

I'm not sure why everyone was so mad at Harry about the annulment. After all, Ginny was the one had the affair and was pregnant with Draco's child. I can understand Molly (and probably Ron) not wanting to lose Harry the "cash cow" from their family. I suppose I can even understand the brothers standing behind Ginny, despite her adulterous liaison, because they don't want to see her name dragged through the mud. Her cheating on the Boy Who Lived certainly won't make anyone named Weasley look good.

Actually dragging Draco, Ginny's partner-in-crime, with them to apparently try and convince Harry to take Ginny back seems rather stupid. I wonder what their purpose was for that idiotic move. A typical example of Weasley-itis, I guess.

I was amused at Ginny calling Gabrielle a "husband stealing harlot," considering their marriage had already been annulled by this time. Ginny, however, truly WAS a husband stealing harlot, as Draco is still married.

I can understand Fleur being upset with Harry considering Gabi's age. That is really the only thing I find troubling about their "activities." Then again, the "Veela thing" kind of muddies the underage issue, because most stories I've read imply that the Veela become sexually active as soon as they mature, around fifteen or so. Gabi definitely seemed to have her allure under control. Fleur was seventeen - one year older than Gabi - during the tournament, and she was considered an adult. I've read fics that have her bonding with Harry - and being quite insatiable, initially - at that age. 's "Harry Potter and His Veela Mate" featured Hermione as a Veela, maturing and requiring sex on her fifteenth birthday; and, yes, I realize those are not canon. That Fleur's parents didn't seem to mind Gabi and Harry being together tells me there was no great crime committed.

"Harry we only have your best interests at heart" and "Harry stop this madness. Ginny loves you," two comments from Hermione, were a surpris, as I would have expected Hermione to understand and support Harry. I don't see how demanding that he return to a cheating ex-wife who is pregnant with Draco's love child is in Harry's best interests. Nor do I see how the situation can possibly be construed to show that Ginny loves Harry. Alas, I guess Hermione has contracted Weasley-itis, a condition which seems to have no cure. It completely obliterates the ability to think rationally and sympathize with the appropriate victim. Arthur's absence and George's comments would indicate that they are not sufferers and still possess their common sense. The others, however, seem to be terminal cases.

Fun story. Thanks for sharing.

Fun and hot. Thanks for the story.

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The story as such is good, but the first chapter seems relatively clean while the second has quite a few spelling and grammar errors. I'd suggest fixing those. Would make a good story into a great one :)

I wish the baby had been Harry's but oh well.

Can we please get that Harry/Gabbi/Astoria story now!? Please, please, Pleeeeaaassse!?

PRETTY PLEEEEAAASSSE!?

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