Oh please continue if this isn't the end.

This is an awesome story.

Funny enough, I've always felt I'm more productive at ungodly hours lol it's then when you reflect and become inspired, and you try and fight sleep while you try finishing something you know is good.

Anyway, I have no idea how I stumbled on this story but it's awesome. Characterization wise jade is frequently portrayed this way but you add a special twist to both characters I've never seen. Refreshing.

Looking forward to reading.

Another great chapter. Even if it was just a filler I liked it. I hope you got what you wanted in tje GCSE...tough stuff

Great filler chapter! I can't wait for more Jori! Keep up the great work!

u r awesome

Nice filler. Can't wait for the next chapter.

For filler written late at night, this ain't bad at all. I liked the introspective look Jade took of herself and her life. And I'm glad she's finally seeing deeds

So Jade has taken a moment to think. Now lets see her live.

Beautiful story! It is extremely captivating and mesmerizing! I really enjoyed reading each chapter! I read it in one-go and I was left craving for more.
You characterize Tori and Jade very well and I really like how unique your story is. The fire and ice is a wonderful part of your story!
Keep up the fantastic writing! I hope you update soon becaue I can't wait to read more! :)

u r awesome

THIS STORY IS GOING TO BE THE END OF ME!

Nicely done update.

For someone with writer's block you write a hell of a good story! Once again I'm enveloped in the story and left gasping for more. Every night before I go to sleep I check to see if you've updated, and when you have it's perfect. It's like a perfect bedtime story that I'm reading bit by bit. Keep up the good work because this is great!

I think this was pretty damned good - even if it was written at 3 AM. Will Jade finally succumb to Tori completely?

Deep. Poetic and deep. Everything to Jade seems symbolic. I'm waiting until she's more than that, until the poet is freed and becomes the master of her heart, healing the pain and finding the love inside her. Tori can be strong some times.

This was really good...what caused Jade to become this way? If you time jump ate you going to address her issues before you get there?