Reviews for Broken Mask
unluckyomen13 chapter 1 . 5/15/2018
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Guest chapter 10 . 9/23/2016
I think haru should teach Hinata and naruto together but they don't tell everyone so Hinata's father does not know she is friends with naruto fanfic
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 11 . 7/30/2015
Heh... Thank you. Not sure if I will follow to AO3, though.
Kikuriki chapter 2 . 5/21/2015
I saw 'spotted dick' and my immature brain cackled and giggled and my other brain made the connection of 'ah, yes, that would be british pudding.'
LavenderCloud chapter 11 . 12/4/2014
I'm glad I can still read your newest chapters of Brocken Mask on Archive of our own. This story is great.
And I'm looking forward to you updates :)
LavenderCloud chapter 3 . 12/3/2014
I'm on this side under LavenderCloud I just misplaced my password. I'll remember it later, Any way I first saw this story title on archive of our own came back to fanfiction. read the first two chapters then the two Archive chapters and am loving both. Your very poetic, descriptive and I'm happy I have five more chapters to read. I usually like reading author making adjustment to their story, seeing what they might want too add adjust or change over time. I like both of your story version are equally ! Now I got to go read the next five chapters :)

From your newest fan,
LavenderCloud
SoulMore chapter 10 . 8/12/2014
FAN!
Fire Dolphin chapter 10 . 5/22/2014
poor Iruka! i was wondering why hasn't harry adopted naruto? I think he would be the perfect person to do this, or at least have naruto stay in his apartment. lovely story, hope u update soon
Kilataia chapter 10 . 3/31/2014
Interesting story!
Mashkai30 chapter 10 . 2/26/2014
Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!
ObsidianGoddess chapter 10 . 2/14/2014
I really like it please update and let's have some jealousy too with someone else liking harry
kirallie chapter 10 . 11/13/2013
How would he react to knowing his uncle has Iruka? And why isn't he registering as in Konoha? Liked the insight into him with the two kids even if Naruto was asleep
Fk306 chapter 10 . 11/11/2013
This is great I look forward to the next update
lance215 chapter 10 . 11/11/2013
kyaaaaaaa i cant wait to see iruka wake up! it would be hilarious! XD you really have to continue this story! it's amazing! and really well write! i cant hope for another IrukaHarry! your is the best!
contuei cause i cant wait!

kisses!
lance215 chapter 9 . 11/11/2013
omg! OMG! Oh My God! i love this fic! this iruka almost make me have an orgasm!XD not kidding! i mean they both are soooooo sexy! i hope you continue it cause i cant wait! it gonna be naruhina in the future? i would love it! cause in this fic i dont see naru with anyone else! execpt maybe sai .! i really love this fic!

continue it soon

kisses!
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