| Reviews for Thin Ice |
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TruthlessOfKorriban chapter 13 . 8/13 KILL! KILL! KIIIIIILLLLLLLL! |
MiuraWtr chapter 16 . 7/13 Awww finally~ I noticed the canon, their relationship before shippuden is a bit cold. But I think I can relate with Naruto's look so similar with his father Trust your instinct! Then I knew this story would be just amazing. I already have the suspicion about Sai before ch 10. He is too close to Naruto. And it turn out like that. Yeah the best way to break someone, especially a boy. and after ch 10 everything in earlier chapters make sense and fit it perfectly. This is good. In the 1st ch I though Kakashi and Yamato looks like villains but then I knew it's not that. And Im really glad Sasuke wants to help Kakashi whatever the reasons. Cause yeah fuvk Danzo for belittling Uchiha and sharingan. He is so sick. And about Sai, that explanation is makes sense. it like a late puberty and the feeling didnt handled in the right way. Poor Sai for being villain here. haha Thanks for writing I hope u edit the typos though. Cause that are always the same mistakes. Tsuande-samma, Kohana, for example. There and their, here and hear, well and we'll, his and he, the and are, etc |
MiuraWtr chapter 2 . 7/12 the story is so interesting but the typos are somewhat disturbing maybe u need it re-checked, that's all example of typos: hear become here, Tsunade become Tsuande, Tsunade-sama, not samma, well become we'll. thanks for writing |
Nik1627 chapter 16 . 4/19 This story touched my heart, broke it and they fixed it back. I'm crying from all the feels. I'm definitely sure that it comes in my most favorite Naruto fan fictions! |
Urutiyori chapter 1 . 10/21/2019 Very good story |
tmntlover2013 chapter 16 . 6/11/2019 Great job on the story, I loved it, especially the ending it was soooo sweet, keep up the great work and keep on writing |
Dragon0905 chapter 16 . 5/10/2019 ...vastly different from my expectations. This was so far away from what I thought, that I dont even know where to start. A few minor grammar issues here and there. But overall if you changed the names, you could have sold this as a drama to a movie studio. I've definitely watched far worse. |
Po chapter 1 . 3/21/2019 Can't stand bitch Naruto |
DeClairmont913 chapter 1 . 4/28/2018 Reading this while listening to Sevdaliza's Amandine Insensible. love it! |
tnthbomb123 chapter 1 . 3/15/2018 This story is absolutely amazing. Definitely one of , hands down |
peachflavorr chapter 16 . 8/22/2017 I really hardcore enjoyed this story and the parental relationship in it. Writing was impeccable. 33 |
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 16 . 12/27/2016 This was really developed well. The insecurities and fear that came with being sexually abused was quite accurate. You did a great job writing this fic. |
TheOlympus chapter 16 . 10/28/2016 The ending really wonderfull... Thank you Author-san you made my day. |
Arw165 chapter 16 . 9/25/2016 This is one of my favs! This is one of very few no-SasuNaru fics (which is 99% of what I read) I keep returning to, which is something. There's even no Sasuke, except for the last chap! I love the idea of antagonist Danzo, which tries to control Kyuubi, making Sai the bad guy plus parental Kakashi. I think the use of some yaoi elements (non-consensual, but still) made it more attractive to me too, though it wasn't obvious in the beginning (abuse is a fast term). I'm happy you write SasuNaru too. |
Astrorea chapter 16 . 9/20/2016 This is amazing! I absolutely love this fic, I literally couldn't stop reading it xD This story was so perfectly played out! I honestly didn't see of of those freaking deadly plot twists coming at all, and it was so good! I love an unpredictable story, it makes it all the more better and unique. The bonds between Kakashi and Naruto was so amazing in this, I love a fatherly Kakashi so much :D I truly loved how all of the events that went down in this was put into perspectives and not only that but that everything that happened had it own domino effect, such as what happen to Naruto. Of course he couldn't just bounce back for something like that, but how you still kept his own character in check made it so believable and perfect, like how he still tried to act like he was fine after the stuff he was going through or how no matter what, his determination to keep his friend's safety before his own is just so like him. I mean, here and there, they were a little OOC, but it wasn't nearly enough to make the entire thing seem ridiculous, so great job on that! ;D It was quite the bumpy ride, but you laid out the entire plot and story out beautifully and just the right amount of detail made this really come to live! Bravo, on that! I'm also glad that bastard Danzo died. So. Glad. BUT WHEN KAKASHI TEAMED WITH SASUKE?! I just... AHH. I got the chills man! It was such a awesome way to clash the final battle. And how Sasuke stayed in character made it so much more realistic, like how he was still curious as to why Kakashi was after Danzo and what happened with Naruto, but no so much that he swayed from his initial intentions and return to the village or anything. So that was great :D But the toward the endings with Naruto and Kakashi's relationship, so much fluff! And what Naruto was recovering from didn't disappear over night. And Kakashi understood that, but still was staying by Naruto's side no matter what really was so bubbling, but it was perfect because there's not ever the perfect happy ending. Some things aren't always gonna be the same, but they still won't let that stand between them. So how you just tied this conclusion up was the cherry on top! I'd definitely recommend this to anyone! It's pretty dark, though my own opinion is my favorite kind of story, but it's nice to see, because through life we shouldn't expect the fairy tale ending like we see in movies. Of else we're just gonna be reeeally disappointed. xD But no matter how many dark periods peak in life, they can never ever outshine the bright times. In my own terms, this story did one of the best jobs at making that point. Absolutely brilliant work. 10/10. 5 stars. Two thumbs up. Thank you so much for sharing this story! |