How is this Tales Of Berseria?!
Remove this and literally classify it only as a Harry Potter fanfic because I don't get why this is even crossover with Tales Of Berseria if there is no Velvet, Eizen, Magilou and any other characters from the game.

Such a disappointment, I can't believe I got my hopes up with a illegitimate fanfic.

AMAZING

Lol

This chapter is racist just so you know. When you were talking about Dean inthe fields was the racist part. Sorry but can you change it (I'm not really asking).

This is not the harry potter I know you suck!

Omg, Draco is Cruella De Vil! I can't stop laughing!

Again, what the literal fuck is wrong with you

What the literal fuck is wrong with you

Couldn't even make it to the end of the first chapter. This isn't "My Immortal" bad - but it's pretty lousy writing. Sorry Dude - them's the facts. I was just glad to see that the comments section had others weighing in on how lacking this was.

Don't get too discouraged by the criticism though. Keep at it and I'm sure you can improve.

A little more raping would be nice

While the writing quality of your story is great, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

You should remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain on this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed such as AdultFanfiction or Archive Of Our Own.

I don't know how I managed to finish the first chapter. This is absolutely terrible

Wait, you abandon this although you never wrote the HP/HG/GW threesome you promised us in the summary? Tststs

This story is friggin hilarious
Bonus points for being good enough to jack off to

duck your racist af story. if you said that dean was used to working in the field because he's black.