| Reviews for Closure |
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Hope Quill chapter 1 . 6/11/2014 Wow. Awesome story. I'd really like another chapter, which takes place next time they meet. :) |
Anifan1 chapter 1 . 5/3/2014 Very creative and well written. Going on my favorites list. :) |
Queen Serenity chapter 1 . 12/8/2013 I loved this story. So well-written. Would like to see it followed up on. |
KLR chapter 1 . 12/2/2013 Wow, I come back to this part of maybe once a year and browse stories from one of my favorite series... and let me say, this takes the cake for knock-my-socks-off good. Such maturity here! I hope you continue! I almost had a tear at Esplin's realization that someone may want to fight for him. Awesome! |
Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay chapter 1 . 12/1/2013 At first I wasn't sure about this and I am really glad I opened it. Cassie and a former Visser becoming friendly; not sure if that's a good or bad idea. Is there more? I'm asking because the mobile site doesn't say if fics are in progress or complete unless you ask in settings. |
GuesssWho chapter 1 . 10/6/2013 Wow, I'm actually feeling sorry for the old lunatic. |
Convenient Alias chapter 1 . 9/24/2013 As you said, "It is hard to stay angry without an Andalite prince screaming in your head all the time." Wow, yeah...Actually that could have contributed a lot to Visser Three's issues, now that I think of it. I like the ending, how Cassie promises to come back. Cause yeah, it's not like she'll care if the higher ups disapprove. She's an Animorph; she can do anything she wants. For the most part. I'm also glad you chose Cassie for this story. If Jake did it, the conversation would turn into a mental shouting match and Jake would come out even more traumatized than ever. Closure? Hahaha no. If Rachel did it, it would turn into a mental shouting match again. Maybe not as much trauma as with Jake, but I don't think she'd stop Esplin from committing suicide. If Marco did it, there would definitely be mental argument, though it would be a bit snarkier. I think he'd be too scared of the Visser to do it, though. If Tobias did it...dunno. He's a hawk, can't predict him. But Cassie was perfect! Awesome story. |
Nina chapter 1 . 8/19/2013 I love it. I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I want the next conversation. Chapter two? Please? |
ccwashere chapter 1 . 8/16/2013 I really enjoyed this. It's interesting to see Esplin's thoughts after the war, and I think in choosing Cassie to speak with him you were successful in drawing out of him the softer side. But having him freak out was perfect. That's the Visser we all know. It's hard for me to find a story that will actually hold my attention, but you did so with a mix of great writing and awesome direction. I like the idea of Esplin trying to kill himself too. I honestly thought he would, but was then surprised. Yeah, Cass is good. Thanks for sharing I loved it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2013 This was so moving and it was written perfectly in character - this is great |