Daddy Gibbs for the win! Awesome story and i just finished reading 2 & 3 thank you for writing such an amazing story!

This is one fine story, really liked it!

I like the story very much. Although I think it would’ve been better for Tim, and less humiliating if Ziva, Tony or another trusted agent escorted Tim to autopsy.

Dude... Duuuuuude, that was some story. Wow.

pond scum haha

Liked this a lot until you decided Gibbs would be Tim's dad. Really wish you hadn't done that.

Dr. Brad Pitt? Really? Nice story though. You were the one who made me like the NCIS fandom.

There is a TV show from the '60's called "Voyage to the Bottom of the Ocean." An adm. Nelson was the sub's CO-and a David Crane was his 2IC. Is that where you got the David Crane you mentioned in this story? Just curious.

Awwww, I don't usually read mcgivas but this worked really well. I love the father/son relationship too!

I love Tim-Centric stories, but I don't like it when much of the story is devoted to bashing the other members of Team Gibbs. You avoided that with story, and I really appreciate it. Great work! :)

You and I both, my friend.. I loved the Ziva character and the work done by Cote too.. I was saddened when she decided to leave the show too.. But what shocked me most was the extreme reaction of some fans.. They went wild, calling her a traitor and didn't hesitate insulting the actress on-line, much to the dismay of her co-actors… I remember reading about Pauley Perrette's indignation at many occasions.. I read sometimes the Facebook page of NCIS and a year after Cote's departure there are still people who want her back but now they tend to insult the new actress who plays Bishop, put her down.. I can't believe how some people can be so obsessive, rude and jerks.. Times change, and these people just are not able to accept changes, give people the right to live their lives as they wish..

Ooh I feel an interesting coincidence coming into view from Gibbs's reaction.. Could it be possible for him to be Tim's biological father ? That would be great ! And about the love scenes, don't worry my friend, during my navigation for McGee fanfics, I found much more torrid sex scened fictions of all kind, and some of them were all about sex ! Your paragraph wasn't long enough to bother me.. Plus it wasn't just about sex, there is a lot of affection too.. Go for it..

Hello again, friend.. I read some of your other fanfics and I loved them, so I'm happy to have found this one.. especially after reading two fanfics where Tim de-ages because of a drug and becomes a toddler ( McBaby and it's alternative sequel), it was nice to have the opportunity to be able to read an adult McGee once again.. Although I already liked those where Gibbs takes care of and adopts baby Tim-such a sweet bond between them-I must confess that I missed the adult Tim centered stories a lot.. It was their writer, FreakyHarmon1 who recommended your stories, so who am I to ignore it ? LOL..

Absolutely fantastic! Loved it!

Excellent. Very enjoyable!