Ravenclaw forever! Very angsty chap here!

Right. Your writing is pretty good, I’ll give you that. But I don’t like the emphasis on rape, because a personal experience can be equally traumatic without it. I always like to believe in the phrase “Less is more.” A little bit of something counts for a lot. The story is quite disturbing, and I think that you’re pretty talented if you can convey that disturbance with not too many explanatory words, if you know what I mean. I also really don’t think it would be realistic to bring religion into the world of Harry Potter. For example, why on Earth would Harry not have his wand on him at all times? If he had his wand, he would have been able to blast his uncle off of him and protect himself. I’m sure he’d rather risk expulsion from Hogwarts than let his uncle violate him in such a gross way. And we all know that Voldy lusts after dear Bella, doesn’t he? (By the way, Voldy’s soul is literally so messed up that I don’t know if his privates would even be intact, lol.) Anyways, you have talent, like I said earlier. I’m just stopping here because it’s getting a bit too disturbing for me to handle. Good day (or night) to you!

Hi. I kinda like this story. I like parts of it. I like the story line, I like the relationship between Harry and Snape. There are a few things, such as the homophobia and religion that really piss me off though. I think there is a good story here, there's just a bit to much baggage attached. It's well written and I love the scoring system.

Poor Harry
Btw I’m Gryffindor

SLYTHERIN

So, you insinuate that people who watch porn become rapists, place excessive importance on Harry's perceived purity, hail Christianity, which is responsible for some of the most atrocious acts of rape ever committed, as the cure for all ailments, and on top of that you lay on the homophobia nice and thick. As a queer survivor of multiple sexual assaults, two of them condoned by my Church, I am utterly disgusted in this fic and in you.

HOW DARE YOU KILL MY BOY IN SUCH A HEART BREAKING WAY. though I do respect his last words

OCC LU ME N C Y

Why did you have to bring religion into this?

I never get why wizards and witches have godparents and act like Christians. I mean, aren’t they suppose to be witches/wizards?

I hope that you are killed for the way that you write you motherfucking cunty cunt pig fat scum! I hope that you are killed and you should have your throat pulled out you piece of cunt you cunt pig scum and you are a cunty cunt pig scum

Ewwwww church Christians are horrible people

oh gooood im gonna cry
usually when i read rape its just-violent, and gone! But the way you described it ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh harry

I am a Hufflepuff and when Harry comes back to school I will help him in anyway I can

I already am hooked!