Wow, as someone who once was damn near inseparable from their brother but slowly grew apart as we grew older this really hit home.

I am absolutely crying. This is beautiful.

Wow, great job! It’s almost sad to see how Raph’s innocent love to Leo becomes shadowed with frustration and anger...

Well that just f***ed my feelings up

The reverse chronology of the narrative added to the impact of the fabula and its angsty feels. I've always loved the tense and passionate relationship between Leo and Raph, and your writing brought that to the foreground. Thank you.

OMG. This was... incredible. I love the (de)evolution of the relationship and how you basically disect Raph. It is a marvelous work.

I read this and then, in tears, I read it again except this time from bottom to top. More tears. Thanks for these beautiful moments.

Excellent! Beautifully written!

Angst hurts like a punch to the face, yet a cant stop reading it. This story in particular is very sad, yet so very good. I really enjoyed it.

Aww! This is awesome!

But one thing. In 2007, Leo's eyes and Raph's eyes aren't blue and green, but amber (brown).

OH
MY
GOD

I ACTUALLY SCREAMED AT THE END OH MY GOD IM GASPING IM CRYING THIS WA THANK YOU FOR THIS OH MY GOD I NEEDED THIS HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP HOL THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU HAVE I TOLD YOU THANK YOU?

okay great I just have one question:
1. fucking WHO GAVE YOU THE RIGHT, WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME

This fic absolutely destroyed me and a part of me really hates it (but most of me loves it)

God I freaking love the turtle tots

So adorable. I just pictured Raphael and Leonardo together through all the problems that they face

This was really well written and I loved the countdown format. Interesting look into raph and his relationship with his brothers, I really enjoyed it

Amazing