Wow! I have read a lot of fics, that I should and shouldn’t read. This is probably one of the latter, but I read it anyway. I’m sure glad I did, too. Will Emma’s parents find out? Will they still get married? I’d love to see where this goes! Please update this or write a sequel!

one word. Wooooooooow

So hot! I like the relationship, they are together and in love and exploring new fun things to do.

So very hot. Killian would definitely why she would use a toy when she had him.

Loving it!

woo!

Oh, wow. Perfect smut fix! :) I'd just like to say as well, apologies if this sounds really perverted or creepy, but I love how you describe it when Hook comes (particularly in chapter 2) because I've read other fics where it's like: 'he came.' I'm like whattttttt, nooo, I'm reading a smut fic, I want DETAILS hahaha, so thankyou;) You should write more smut for these 2, your perfect at it! 3

Whew! WOW, girl! VERY nice! *fans self* Ok, now that was pretty down and dirty!

Also, I have to totally add Hook's comments about how poorly written 50 Shades was, it made me laugh SO HARD because I could only get a few chapters into it, too, and Anastasia was such a weak willed poorly written character that it just made me want to vomit. So thank you for that, it was wonderful knowing that someone else feels the same!

Haaaaaaaaaaa! The filthiest thing you've written? Trust me, sugar, it only gets worse from here, I know it as a fellow smut writer! And bloody brilliant, by the way, I totally enjoyed this!

Wow ... that was pretty intense and very accurate for pretty much all it. Not many people take on such a kink, and you did it very well.

Ooo ... how VERY deliciously naughty!

Another erotic one. Excellent.

Whew ... that was definitely steamy.

Whew! Scorching :)

This was just a perfect ending. !