Loved it!

When do you think you'll have 'Fragments' started?

Hey when are you going to update your story, Jinchuuriki Reborn? I ask because it's the best Naruto/Transformers crossover that exists! Please update if you have not abandoned the story.

Finnly something fun nor as fun as mpreg fic but still (I'm so wierd ) hum ...mpreg anyways I enjoy your story's and hope to see more

Cool! The next part in the series. I'll be waiting to read "Fragments". Keep up the great work and try not to stress yourself.

I cannot help but enjoy reading about how Knock Out tortures Jack. You write Knock the creep well. Will keep my eyes peeled for the next installment.

This makes me wonder how this story would go if Jack ran into Wheeljack instead of Starscream, I think that has potential if your interested.

Oh wow. Hope, and kinda sweet and the restraint, its gone!

Or, at least I hope so.

Awkward fumbling, didn't really expect anything else with Jack the way he is.

I think I might actually be shipping Jack and Starscream

I really hope Jack overcomes his fear at some point and totally kicks Knock Out's aft. (Or more suitably, dismembers that sick fragger. I'd also be up for Knock Out being thrown into the shadowzone for the rest of eternity, where he can never harm Jack ever again.)

I really don't like the way Knock Out looked at June. I swear to god if he targets her or hurts ONE hair on her head, no one will protest if the Autobots decide to get rid of him permanently.

I also hope Wheeljack punches Optimus, mainly cause I love the idea of a Protective!Wheeljack. Though, I really do hope the truth comes out soon. It won't make things better, but maybe it'll help restore Jack's faith in Optimus.

I just gotta say, whenever you update I end up having a good day. Thanks so much for updating again!

I love how you've drawn this out, of course. Megatron might need to kil Knock Out as he's CLEARLY gone bonkers, thinking a vehicon is Wheeljack.

I mean, that's just..ugh.

Knocks is an evil fragger isn't he? And I hope Jack works out how he's going to solve that problem... you know, the not being able to kill Knock Out problem... I hope that this updates soon... It's really good!

I love this story so much. I never thought I would want to hit Optimus this badly