Reviews for The Trials Of Pregnancy
Anonymous chapter 7 . 12/13/2019
Beautiful... *holds out empty bowl* more please.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2019
Absolutely awesome and magnificient
CaitiAthena chapter 7 . 10/3/2017
i love the storu
marilena chapter 5 . 8/28/2017
Cinderella was a young princess who used to be a servant to her evil stepmother but her good and caring stepsisters Guinevere and Tiffany who with their help she learned to stand up for herself without anyone going to protect her. Now she was in camelot and Guinevere was talking to Arthur:Well i think it's time from you to confess your love to my stepsister Cinderella she's been waiting for years for a prince to save her from the abuse of my mother. He said to her:Okay i'll confess my love to her but why didn't she told me she was abused by your mother?. Tiffany interupted saying:Because she was afraid you won't like her after finding that her life was not easy as it was when she had her parents that's why. Arthur said to her:I love her more than anything and now as a boyfriend it's my duty to protect and care for my girlfriend probably future wife. Cinderella herself was walking down in the halls after learning that her aunt nancy wasn't feeling well and she hoped she'll be fine and she said:I hope my aunt will get bettter she my stepsisters and arthur are the only people who cared for me. Snow white said:Don't forget that how much i and fiona bothlove you as sister too!. She smiled saying:I know snow white and i'm glad i have people who care about me for who i am not because i'm a princess. Soon the door opens and the doctor appeared at the gateway and Sir lancelot asked:How's my girlfriend doctor?. The doctor said:Very well sir lancelot!. The doctor then takes cinderella's hand and shook it saying:Congratulations Mrs Cinderella You'll be an aunt. Cinderella stood for a moment or two still staring at the doctor saying:What?. And then she fainted but as she fainted she felt muscular arms holding her up and she could see it was Arthur her dear boyfriend who saw her faint and decided to help her up. He glared at the doctor and angrilly shouted:Thank you for making my poor girlfriend faint!. Snow white said gently to him:I am sure he didn't meant it arthur!. He said to her:But that doesn't gives him a right to make my poor sweet girlfriend faint!. He looks to Cinderella who was in his arms and said:Cinderella my love please wake up I need you. He carries her to their bed chambers and sets her carefully to bed and gently wiped her sweaty forehead and patted her beautiful blonde hair. He stayed by her side for hours hoping she'll wake up but if she will not wake up then he will die with her and be reunited in heaven. He felt her pulse increasing which terrified him very much and he called out in fright:Guinevere please come quick!. Guinevere rushed up and saw that her stepsister's pulse was icnreasing and she panicked and brought a cold towel and layed it on her forehead and she told to Arthur:If it continues we must call merlin he might know what will happen. Luckily the pulse regained back to normal and arthur sighed in relief after wiping his sweaty forehead before placing a kiss on Cinderella's hand and said:My love please get better for me i won't live without you. The next morning Cinderella woke up and she saw the man she loved form her high school looking down at her with relief as he saw her wake up and he said:My beautiful Cinderella i was so worried of you for a moment i thought i lost you. She asked him weakly:What happened dear Arthur?. He said to her gently:You fainted from the news of your aunt's pregnancy but please dear cinderella don't do that again you scared me. She nodded in reply and he kissed her gently careful to not hurt her again in her fragile state. There was a big competition for king arthur to choose a bride and surprisingly he chosed cinderella. One day Aristeidis or simply known as Bohort was hypnotized by morgana the evil stepsister of Arthur and he forgot about Ninian and he decided to marry her. But Isolde suddenly saw the reflexion of morgana[ursula] in the mirror and she screamed:Oh fuck i must warn Arthur and Cinderella. Cinderella in the meantime was wearing her yellow dress while trying on her glass slippers which perfectly fitted and as for Arthur he was holding excalibur in his hands while Guinevere eyed him worriedly as for snow white she was still sleeping in the coffin and fiona was still looking out fo her castle's window. When suddenly Isolde came screaming like an idiot saying:Oh somebody please help us this is dreadful. Cinderella came saying:Oh Isolde what happened do tell us what happened. Guinevere was worried equally saying:Oh what happened in here?. Isolde shouted saying:I saw the evil witch i mean lady morgana she was looking in the mirror. Lancelot was not amused and he was not enjoying it while Guinevere didn't knew what was she saying. Isolde continued:I saw her looking herself at the mirror and she was grinning evilly while laughing about killing Cinderella by marrying Bohort. Cinderella asked weirdly:Okay now i am a little weirded out Isolde please tell me what happened?. Isolde tells:And she moving her eyelashes before the image of ursula appeared [takes cinderella by the face and hits her down the ground] You hear what am i saying Princess Cinderella Prince bohort is marrying the witch of the sea in disguise. King Arthur rushed over to his girlfriend and eyed Isolde dangerously saying:Hey what did my girlfriend do to you to hit her?. She said:I am sorry King Arthur but i wanted to show that we're in trouble. He said holding cinderella in his arms protectivelly:And do you think by harming her will help?. After a lovely walk Arthru and Cinderella choose to marry right now and they did. They lived happily ever after in Camelot before ruber came and Arthur received an information by lady Juliana and she told to come to downstairs so they'll speak and in the meantime Clarisse was lost. Arthur wasn't in a good condition due that he broke his arm and he walked downstairs with Cinderella saying:Julianna?. Cinderella said:I do hope she knows where Clarisse is her mother will kill us. Arthur said:Oh cinderella she'll not do that or else i'll kill her.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/28/2017
Once upon a time before ruber tried to plot revenge on Camelot there lived a handsome young king named Arthur. His hair and beard were blonde like the sun and his eyes were blue like the sky. Everyone loved their king but he was very lonely since he didn't had either a wife either a son or daughter to play with. One day he received some information by his fellow teacher Mr merlin that he has to marry a princess but he wondered how can he marry a princess? when ruber wants revenge on camelot. Soon a woman brought a magic mirrror which made everyone shocked when it was revealed the mirror had the face a woman. The mirror spoke up:I heard that a wise young king named Arthur wants help to find a wife is that true?. The young king stepped up and said:Yes it's true mrs mirror but there's soemone who wants revenge on me and whoever i'll marry might die by his wrath. The mirror said:Don't worry about that sir cause it's time to meet today's edible bachellerottes and here they are [goes away and shows three paintings of three beautiful women and another one who is the picture of sleeping beauty]. However when the king layed his eyes on the first picture his heart began to beat so loud by the beauty of the lady who was in it. She was rather tall perfect size for a queen and she had beautiful blond hair tied in a bun and her skin was kind of white like wheat her eyes were closed but there was a nice smile on her lips. She wore a large yellow ballgown which seh held with her two delicate hands and also she was wearing a pair of glass slippers. Merlin could see how his student was staring all the time on the first picture and he smirked at him knowing that this lady would make a great queen. The mirror said:Enjoying the woman in the first pciture sire?. King Arthur was staring at the picture of the first lady all the time almost drooling at how beautiful and sexy she was and he said:Yes magic mirror that lady in the first picture is really a hot chick. The mirror said:Indeed she is sire look at how she sparkles with the yellow dress and her glass slippers. Lancelot said to his cousin:Why don't You choose her Arthur?. The king looked at the woman in the first pictue her body looked the perfect size for a queen and he said:Magic mirror what's her name?. The mirror said:Okay bachellerotte number one is a beautiful lady from a far away kingdom she likes sushi and hot tubbing her hobbies are cleaning and cooking take this beautiful lady sire cause she's worth it please welcome Cidnerella.
The king looked at the lady in portrait number one she was exactly the girl he dreamed of marrying then Guinevere de Galorus who actually teased him back when he was a kid and before anyone could ask about the second lady he said:I made up my mind of who i will marry. The mirror asked:Who do You pick of all these ladies ? [Cidnerella,Snow White,Fiona and Sleeping Beauty] eh sire?. King Arthur responded:I choose the lady in number one!. Merlin said to his student:You made a good choise Your higness!. Lancelot said:I knew he would choose the lady in portrait number one because the moment he layed his eyes on her he felt a connection with her. The lady in portrait number one opened her eyes and they were the perfect blue eyes King Arthur had ever seen and after she saw the king looking at her she felt a connection too but she asked the mirror:Who did he choose as the queen?. The mirror responded to the lady:You of course!. The lady in portrait number one whose name was Cinderella smiled at this as the mirror said to the king:My lord You choosed Princess Cidnerella. For a moment or two Cinderella looked at the young king who looked at her drooling at how beautiful and sexy she was which made her blush madly. Before he lifted her hand and pulled her out of the portrait and said:You are a lovely lady Princess Cinderella!. She responded happily:You are a handsome man King Arthur. And soon Merlin said:Welcome the now newly crowned king and queen of camelot. After a day Ruber appeared in camelot and went to attack the king. Queen Cinderella seeing this despite the pleading he gave to her she jumped up and said:No if You kill my husband kill me first. The sword sliced a vein through her heart and the onlookers gasped at this while King Arthur was very sad and he gasped shocked at this. Kayley and Garret luckily managed and defeated him and Cinderella told to her husband who rushed to her side and was holding her hand:Arthur my dear You must go and take the sword as You are the rightful heir. But King Arthur himself didn't dared to move and take the sword he was really worried of his wife and he said:No Cinderella You're important to me I won't go now maybe later but not now. Cinderella was moved to tears as Merlin was examining her wound and King Arthur was hoping that his wife would live and she won't die but was completely sad when merlin shook his head and said:I'm afraid the wound is really severe there's nothing to save her. Cinderella looked to her husband who was crying bitterly and she cupped his cheek and she said:Arthur my dear please don't marry another woman. He said to her through sobs:How can i think about another woman when i'm losing You?. Cinderella said barely as a whisper:Please Arthur just remember that i will always love you. They embraced each other and the onlookers cooed at this and sighed in romance and soon cinderella closed her eyes and died in King Arthur's arms.
marilena chapter 5 . 8/22/2017
Well being eight months pregnant was certainly amusing for Queen alice because her stomach had gotten rather big and the kicks of her daughter had gotten rather hard but she and her husband King Arthur didn't mind instead tehy were excited when their daughter kicked that meant she's healthy. One christmas day her king had entered the magic polar express with their two sisters Sophia and Marina. Christina [Vivian of Avalon] their cousin was six months pregnant and she was making pizza challenge with the queen and her mother Queen Eugenia and they were making sweet pizza with sweet ingredients. They ate an entire slice of it halfway through Christina dropped the bowl she was eating the pizza and clutched her stomach playfullly:
[Christina] Ow!.
[ Queen Alice] Cousin Christina are You okay?
Bohort imediately run over to his wife and holding her hand he panicked saying to her:
[Bohort] Breath Christina Breath in remember what Gauis said!.
[Henny Penny] [whispering to the queen who found it funny and was laughing] Does he knows that it was just a kick?.
[Queen Alice] No but he will find out!.
[Bohort] Lancelot pack everything up this instant my wife is giving birth.
[Christina] [giggling amsuingly] Bohort!.
[Queen Alice] [screaming loud from him to hear] Bohort!.
[Bohort] We need to get back as soon as possible
[Vivian] Bohort!
Bohort stops what he is doing and runs to his wife's side and taking her hand he said gently:
[Bohort] I'm here sweetheart don't worry we will get there as soon as possible.
[Vivian] It was just a kick
Guinevere her brother lancelot her sister tiffany and the knights who were packing up froze by Vivian's words.
[Cocky Locky] Cock-a-doodlle-doo Just a kick?.
[Queen Alice] [giggling] Yup just a kick.
[Ducky Lucky] Phew i thought she was giving birth.
Suddenly the door of the bedroom of the Queen opened and Goosey Loosey stepped out flapping her wings like crazy honking around the room making the onlookers to laugh loudly at this while she was panicking.
[Goosey Loosey] Queen vivian of Avalon is giving birth Queen Vivian of Avalon is giving birth!.
[Queen Alice] [laughing loudly] Oh please someone tell her that it was just a kick.
[Goosey Loosey] Your higness Queen Vivian of Avalon is giving birth don't You see?.
[Queen Alice] Oh mrs Goosey Loosey she's not giving birth it was just a kick!.
Goosey Loosey was panicking more she flapped her wings like crazy and scurried to go the bathroom and she got two bowls of hot water and a towel.
[Goosey Loosey] Here are two bowls of hot water and a towel for Queen vivian.
[Queen Alice] [laughing while wiping the tears of her eyes] Oh i'm going to cry of laughter.
[King Arthur] Yes it's really funny.
As Queen Alice is laughing amusingly she nimbles on her nuttela sliced pizza as Goosey Loosey realised it was just a kick and finally she calmed down when suddenly Queen alice felt a kick and she dropped the bowl saying:
[Queen Alice] Ow!.
[King Arthur] Alice!.
The Young King scurried over to his wife and holding her hand he said:
[King Arthur] Breath Alice Breath just remember what Gauis said.
[Queen Alice] [laughing heartedly as she saw her husband panicking] Oh Arthur!.
[Guinevere] I wonder how will You react when our baby will kick lancelot?.
[Lancelot] Probably i'll have the same reaction.
[Henny Penny] Your higness easy now easy childbirth is natural.
[Queen Alice] Oh henny penny [laughing]
[Tiffany] [whispers to the hen] It's just a small kick!.
[Cocky Locky] That doesn't looks like a kick it looks like she's ready to have her daughter [goes to the queen] Cock-a-doodle-doo Easy Your higness childbirth might be prematurely.
[Queen Alice] Oh cocky locky [whispers to the rooster] It's just a kick.
[Ducky Lucky] [giggling amusingly before whispering to the queen] The young princess can surely kick hard her mother! Quack Quack.
[Queen Alice] She does!.
[King Arthur] Lancelot get everything packed up My wife is about to have my child!.
[Queen Alice] [giggling] Oh Arthur.
[Guinevere] [Falls down laughing] Oh my god his reaction is priceless.
[Tiffany] That's really funny.
Goosey Loosey was in the bedroom sleeping when she had heard the kick of the Queen's belly and she mistook that the baby was coming and she panicked.
[Queen Alice] [shouting to Arthur] Arthur!.
The Young king stopped what he was doing and running to his queen he grabbed her hand kissed it and said gently:
[King Arthur] I'm here my Queen don't worry we will get You back as quickly as possible.
[Queen Alice] It was just a Kick!.
The knight,Lancelot,Guinevere,Tiffany,Henny Penny,Cocky Locky and Ducky Lucky who had packed everything stopped at the Queen's words but suddenly they heard a loud bang and saw the door had opened and it crashed over a table and soon Goosey Loosey came out of her room wearing her hat and a dress while scurring around the living room panickly flapping her wings and honking around the living room making the onlookers to laugh loudly then last time but she payed no attention to them as she was honking loudly mistaking the kick of the Queen's baby girl.
[Goosey Loosey] Oh my Queen Alice is giving birth Queen alice is giving birth.
[Queen Vivian] [laughing at the goose] Really?.
[Goosey Loosey] [turning to King Arthur and honking to his face] Don't stand there quick Your wife is giving birth we msut hurry and get her to the hospital.
[King Arthur] [laughing at the goose] Oh Mrs goose calm down.
[Queen Guinevere de Galorus] That's really funny at how she is panicking [until Alice screams in pain]
[Queen Alice] My water's broke i went into an early labour.
[King Arthur] What? Already our daughter wants to be borned today?.
[Queen Alice] Don't ask me ask her!.
Everybody look at Goosey Loosey who freaked out even more when she heard that the Queen went into an early labour and she scurried around the living room panicking while flapping her wings honking like crazy making the knights,Queen Guinevere,Queen Tiffany,King Lancelot du Lac,King Arthur,Queen Alice and Queen Vivian laugh like crazy.
[Billy] [laughing like crazy] I really must put that in the movie!.
[Gogo] I agree with You sweetheart it's really funny at how Goosey Loosey reacts to pregnancy.
But Goosey Loosey didn't found that amusing instead she honked to them to stop teasing and hurry up because Queen Alice is having her daughter right now and she ran to the bathroom and with her soft white wings she pulled one towel and one bowl of hot water and she returned to the living room and set them down and then returned to the bathroom and pulled a pair of scissors and retured to the room again.
[Goosey Loosey] Honk Honk i got everything ready for the birth oh i forgot the rose petals.
[Queen Alice] Hold it right there i'm not dying i'm giving birth to a baby girl why do we need rose petals?.
[Goosey Loosey] To resemble Your daughter's birth Your higness [scurries and takes some rose petals and spreads them around] Here now everything is ready!.
[Queen Alice] Only one problem Who will be the doctor?.
[Goosey Loosey] It will be King Lancelot.
[Queen Guinevere] [looks to Lancelot laughing amsuingly] In Your face lover boy.
[Lancelot] Why do I have to do this?.
[Goosey Loosey] [turns to king arthur] And You sire hold Your wife's hand and assure her everything will be okay and she has to start pushing and breathing.
[King Arthur] Yes mrs Goosey Loosey [looks to his Queen] You heard her dear it's time.
KitKattKittt2349 chapter 7 . 7/4/2017
Nice job!
Guest chapter 6 . 12/13/2015
Fuckin Fantabulous
DestielPotter chapter 7 . 7/21/2015
Very cute story.
Morgan chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
OMG
Guest chapter 7 . 11/3/2013
nothing but fluff I LOVE it!
Guest chapter 7 . 9/26/2013
SEQUEL
Guest chapter 7 . 8/13/2013
I like the tie-in with the series in the berry scene.

Funny dialogue between Arthur and Merlin during labour.

Awww.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/13/2013
Fantastic fight scene when the renegades were caught.

Prince Glen's in a heap of trouble.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/13/2013
"Come back here you COWARDS!" soooo funny.

Also loved how Arthur got into a state of panic when he thought Merlin was going into early labour.

I like how you wrote adventure into this.
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