Reviews for The Wonders of Magic |
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Crystalzap chapter 5 . 12/12/2018 I wish you had changed the ending, cannon's always makes me sad... I like the story a lot though, you kept everyone in character nicely which made it more believable. I would have liked to see more of their adventures together, but this was a good place to stop, which Arthur and Merlin happy together, magic free, and the kingdoms united. |
mayawene chapter 5 . 10/2/2017 thanks |
Hart Truth chapter 5 . 7/12/2017 Good writing. Good story. That's a recipe for me squealing in a public place... No regrets. |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/30/2017 Great story |
Drkwlf chapter 5 . 11/24/2016 Perfect. |
WhiteFireLion chapter 5 . 3/1/2015 I loved this so much! Probably one of the best merlin fanfictions I have ever read. I really would like to read more of it. Like what happens in the modern day and the threat to albion and how they live in present day- like Arthur's struggle to adapt to modern life. It's surprising how many fanfictions don't include these. But I really think you could write it wonderfully! |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13/2014 Beautiful writing. Well paced buildup and progression of their relationship without being sappy. Just lovely. |
SlytherinIceFaery chapter 5 . 11/30/2013 The ending made me bawl! That was great and I love the way you write. Keep up the great work |
Mayle chapter 5 . 11/7/2013 Fuck you that was beautiful! THIS IS AMAZING! EVERYONE NEEDS TO READ THIS! I'M SHARING IT ON TUMBLR! |
Aaviaria chapter 5 . 10/13/2013 Absolutely loved it! |
TheAngelofIego chapter 5 . 10/12/2013 Oh, wow! This is flawless! It's so beautiful and just-wow. Amazing story! |
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2013 I enjoyed your story. Arthur's reactions and the pace you set to bring them together were very believable. It was full of emotion and ended with hope for a future together. Great job. |
UnicornSebaCiel chapter 5 . 9/14/2013 You just broke my heart. Shattered it into a million tiny pieces. But I loved it. ;-; |
Kiki1770 chapter 5 . 9/6/2013 Very beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed this short fic, and I liked Merlin and Arthur's transition from friend zone to lovers. It was realistic and sweet. |
rfresa chapter 5 . 8/31/2013 It's great to read a fic that's true to character, with real emotion and thought in it. Thanks for writing! |