Reviews for Fatherhood
Dman4869 chapter 3 . 10/4/2019
Man I still love rereading this. A really awesome fanfic to see the maturity that tsu a got as well as his son. That kazuna though missed out big. But glad to see her out of the picture and make a comback(that'd b infuriating). Really digging the closeness of the guardians/immer circle. Reborn should have a spot too and be Dubbed grandpa reborn (that'd b cute to read)
Thank you for your hard work!
foxwolf101 chapter 3 . 8/18/2019
I wonder what happen to that women? Did live go horrible wrong or somthing.
jezko1 chapter 3 . 6/18/2016
I love this story, Tsuna as father is adorable :-), thx.
creativesm75 chapter 3 . 1/8/2016
very good
ChordOverstreetFan chapter 3 . 10/14/2015
I kind of want Yoshi to meet Kazuna just to see her get chewed out by the child she abandoned for money.
1sunfun chapter 3 . 10/10/2015
Good story.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/19/2015
Hmm. Xanxus says Yoshi has completely pure Sky flames, but Fuuta makes him sound like an Earth.
valery-chan chapter 3 . 7/19/2015
Waoo... I love Yoshinabuuuuu. I need you to write a new chapter ASAP! Maybe with the Guardians?
Bye from Spain!
Cogan chapter 3 . 7/12/2015
Question, is his... 'Mother' going to show up at some point?
jbadillodavila chapter 3 . 7/8/2015
Sigue asi
Lehna chapter 3 . 5/7/2015
Thank you for this story! I can't wait for the next chapter _
lilyoftheval5 chapter 3 . 4/20/2015
Fascinating...
Leafy365 chapter 3 . 3/19/2015
I LOVE this! This is my favorite chapter as of yet! I love reading about Yoshinobu and Tsuna from other peoples' perspectives and how they all see something special in the two of them.

I really like Fuuta's compare and contrast with the different kinds of skies that Tsuna and his son are. I don't think anyone could be as open as Tsuna (and Giotto) but Yoshinobu is pretty close. Oddly enough, the descriptions of Yoshinobu as a Sky make me think of Xanxus, probably because of the possessiveness and selectiveness you mention. If Xanxus had been raised from birth by a Timoteo who was completely honest with his adopted son, I think he'd turn out to be a Sky very much like Tsuna's son.

My absolute favorite was Xanxus' part. The way he utterly adores his little nephew is heartbreaking and just so lovely to read, especially since Xanxus' affection originally stems from his equally strong affection for Tsuna. I'd love to read how Tsuna won Xanxus over (and the rest of the Varia, maybe?) and how Xanxus reacted when news of Yoshinobu's existence reached his ears.

I don't know if this is intentional on your part, but this fic seems like a mirror of "Definition of Family". There, Tsuna is the child who learns that family and blood don't necessarily mean the same thing. Here, Tsuna takes the opposite role, as a father who didn't necessarily have to be one, but chose it anyway.

Looking forward to more!
Sisp the Enochian chapter 3 . 3/16/2015
It took me a bit of time to chew on this chapter and try to figure out what to say besides the obvious - that it was really cute. Because it is, but there's no point in saying something so simple for a story that deserves more.

I did enjoy how you set Dino and Tsuna up. Until the Guardians have children of their own, I don't think they'll be able to fully understand just how stressful and enjoyable it is to raise a child. They can try, being as close to Tsuna as they are, but they won't get the full effects until they've got their own spawn running around and making their hair go grey with worry.

Xanxus was ridiculously awesome. As he should be for an uncle. Because let's face it, if he and Tsuna get along in the future, he's going to have a hand in training any kid Tsuna pops out, and make sure they're strong enough to become pillars of the Family (both upper and lower case) and keep their own safe. I'd like to think Xanxus has his own spawn running around somewhere in the distant future, but having him as an uncle or surrogate is just as fine.

Enma kind of walked right into that one. XD I mean c'mon, the Earth Flames are important too!

Mochida seems to have matured nicely in your fiction, which I applaude because if he was still behaving like a sexist douche I would have voted to have Yoshi deck him. But he's grown, and seems to understand the whole 'I hate myself' phase that almost everyone goes through. Yoshi would probably hit it hardcore from genetics alone.

Fuuta. This was the part I love the best, simply because you explain the differences between father and son. They're similar, but not the same. Both of them are strong and capable leaders, but there's minute differences about how they treat people that enable them to either sink or swim in the mafia life. And from an outsider's view, that makes all the difference.

In short, wonderful chapter. I'm glad I was able to inspire you enough to write this.
MissDinosaur chapter 3 . 3/6/2015
I read it when you posted this but I was so busy to leave a review ;n;

You kill me everytime you upload this! Haha it's pretty cute to see Yoshinobu growing up and the parts with Xanxus and Enma were my favorite! You really made me happy with this!

I hope you are fine, let's talk again ñater ;u;

See ya!
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