| Reviews for A spring field of cherry blossoms |
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fightingstoryaddiction chapter 1 . 2/13/2017 Interesting but I like it so following it |
Astraea J. Rahagi chapter 1 . 7/20/2015 This is a good start so far, I hope you update soon. |
scarlettravencrove chapter 1 . 6/16/2015 Hope you continue this is awesome !~ |
Cut The Dotted Line chapter 1 . 6/10/2015 Hey, I really liked this. It's been a few years since you posted this, but I was wondering if you were still working on it? |
belladu57 chapter 1 . 4/26/2015 Very good |
Veedramon chapter 1 . 12/6/2014 Like the story, please update. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2014 I like how this story is going and I like the way you write,but half an year already passed and you still haven't updated. Since you only wrote the first chapter you should update soon |
Aki no hikari chapter 1 . 5/5/2014 Seems interesting so far, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Just a tiny correction, "Sekai e yĆkoso, Sakura" is the way you should say it, if you do it the way you wrote it you're saying "welcome to the sakura of the world" |
Regin chapter 1 . 4/21/2014 I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon! |
WindWhistle21 chapter 1 . 3/10/2014 It's a good start! I like how she didn't have a panic attack! Most oc stories seem to have mind-numbing terror as the first reaction to being in the Naruto world. It's nice to see a story where the character doesn't have a mental breakdown at the mere thought of death. :D |
GLaDOS-01 chapter 1 . 3/10/2014 This is a good start, but there's just one thing I wanted to mention; gender has nothing to do with levels of chakra on such general and steel terms. Tsunade has more chakra than Jiraiya for example. What I've noticed is that it depends on bloodlines. Uzumaki clan has the most from what the series says, Uchiha doesn't have as much as it might seem but their abilities overshadow it enough so few notice. Sakura doesn't have a lot of chakra because she doesn't train (the more you train the more you have, simple as that) and because (I'm assuming) she's from a civilian family, or at least one with a bloodline that hasn't seen many generations of shinobi. Also, Kurama was never evil. He was bitter, distrustful and angry, but not evil. I never understand why people act like his attack was like 'searing clouds of evil', or 'terrible malevolence'. Is it just me? Anyway, that's all the negative I have to say. Sorry by the way, half of my rant in this review is simply a byproduct of endless similarly written scenes and/or descriptions. Not your fault for it, I just wanted to get the point off my chest. As for the good stuff, your grammar is nice (much better than a lot of the SIs around here) and the pacing is to the point rather than needlessly going too much into depth. I thank you for that considering we're all tired of having to read and write the beginning days. And although there's an increasing number of Sakura-reborn fics I'm not overly floundered on them considering all of the ones I've read tend to differ enough from each other that they don't have cloned feelings. Lastly, I'm looking forward to where you're going to take this. Please update soon. |
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 2/9/2014 More X3 |
Superpower Lottery chapter 1 . 11/20/2013 Are you planning to continue this? Because it seems cute, and trying to "replace" Sakura given her role in canon is always interesting. |
Zotaru chapter 1 . 9/26/2013 This is a good story so far. I also like how your character isn't random, hyper, or obnoxious like other self-inserts are. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Vaughn Tyler chapter 1 . 8/20/2013 nice |