This is hilarious.

this was fun to read. i wish there was more

This was your your more twisted funny stories thanks

It was a brilliant one liner. Too bad this got so dark; it would have made a great fluff story. Probably also a great dark story of psychological misery and angst as well, but I get how one might not want to write that.

This was hilarious. Please continue!

Oh
My
God
That was brilliant.
Flippin enjoyed that one, lemme tell you. Your humour rocks. Carding Kim's parents... Mr Dr P's approval... So funny xD and the one-liners... "yes, I have worked for a clown" - priceless.
Amazing. You rock

Much as I'd love to see more of this, I have to admit, it's perfect as is. Not that that should, you know, dissuade you from writing more...

"Well, honey, this is why you shouldn't interrupt your mother." Perfect.

And it's always great to see Mr. Dr. P, especially when he's so well-written.

This is great! I love that line "Yes, I worked for a clown." Please continue.

i understand why you walked away but its sad this story is funny but you gota do what yo gota do

I should report this for abuse... because there seriously need to be more written to it *giggles* And I do agree "Yes, I worked for a clown." is a hilarious one-liner. You simply must continue this.

love it

The rest of this story can't come fast enough.

This is one of the funniest things I've read in AGES and I do read a lot of funny things.
James was soo goood from the beginning to the end, the way Shego fooled everyone was incredible.

And the cold talk, with the... SUNGLASSES? My shipping hearth died in joy with those.

It was a good move stopping here before things got dark. The dark side is awesome, but the funny side is even better! Come, coooomeee to the funny side! This way it wouldn't have to be explicity kigo, but still would be.

Even if you never write anything else on this, I kind of prefer, is good as open as it is.

And yes, Shego, sunglasses, coldness, the clown line, just gold.

Excellent. I really like the idea of this fic, it's original.
I like Shego and the interaction between Shego and Kim's Dad.
I like Shego's motivation.
I especially like the sentence :" "Mom!" Kim said, appealing to a higher power."
It's a pity that you don't write a continuation, I really would like a sequel.

I like it, and I should think dark should be easy enough to bypass with what you've got. Shego needs Kim to give it her all, and she won't if she gets emotionally worn down. It doesn't really work if their heads aren't in the game.