Thank you for the story. Wonderful writing

I absolutely loved this story, I think it really delves into Molly's underdeveloped character that does both the canon of herself as well as her inner strength justice. The characters seemed so well portrayed. This was truly a treat

Wow, this really read and felt like Sherlock and Molly to me, even with Molly's secret "life". Well done! Really good!

I don't know where this ride is going...but now that Molly is actually alive and better than ever, welllllll, my seatbelt is now fastened and I am fully on board! I love that she is not just some docile, love sick puppy . Let her be fierce and let him be love sick!

Thank you for putting this idea into words and sharing it with us.

Awesome Sauce

Fabulous story. Almost didn't read it after reading Molly was "dead" but decided to check the last chapter. After that went back and read the whole thing. Well done.

Beautiful, 2018 and it still tickles my fancy

Oh this is adorable.

Loved it, loved it, loved it! You managed to tell a story that was sweet, and exciting, and sexy... I really enjoyed it :)

Simply perfect! The "I love you" (from both), perfect. The fact that Sherlock took her to the shore, perfect. Forgetting to bring food (but having the condom ready), perfect. Sherlock "observing" her hair, perfect. John and Sherlock both falling for spies, perfect. The entire hair/baby discussion scene, perfect. The final line, perfect. Thank you!

Beautiful once again. I truly love how your writing makes everything feel completely realistic. All of Sherlock's suffering, his struggling to come to grips with his newfound feelings, his protectiveness, his affection, love and passion for Molly all come off as completely authentic and I thank you for that.

Wonderfully detailed description of what it was like for Molly as she was waking up. Great dialogue all around as John and Mary came to visit.

Amazing chapter! Sherlock's reaction throughout was perfect. Thank you.

Wow! The end of the chapter was so heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time. He begged (4 times) for this not to be happening. He can't bear losing her, and she would do anything for him.

Such a tender and beautiful chapter. Thank you.

I really enjoyed Mycroft in this chapter.