Incredible! What a gem

This was a very good story.

Well written with a wild sexy imagination. Gee first rape, abuse and rutting. Not so good. Well cohicive story.

Affected not effected

Home again, home again, jiggity jig

I lol'd so hard at this.

Shippou couldn't give the game away so they all could refer to her by name, by title as miko of the Shikon and her roll in the fall of Naraku if the subject ever came up.

Roll should be role. These are the type of things I was trying to point out in my list review. I don't think I did a very good job. So I grabbed this to use as an example of what was trying to say.

Hello. I'm going to start off by saying, this isn't a flame. Or, really, even a criticism. I live this story, what I've ready of it so far, but I've noticed a few mistakes that are constantly repeated. So I thought I'd point them out. First is your use of insure. This is the wrong word to use. The one you want to be using in those places is ensure. Yes, they sound exactly the same, but they have different meanings. Another I noticed was past. You need passed. It's just some small things like this that jump out at me because otherwise, the story is very well written. It just needs since minor fixes. I really do like this story. I'm not sure if you still read the reviews. I hope you do. Because if you can fix all the small, unfortunately jarring, errors in this, it'll go from being a really good story to am amazing story.

i really enjoyed your story :)

This is my second reading of this and I must say I enjoy it just as much as my first. I especially enjoy the ending with the Youkai Council. It was a very interesting story packed with citrus.

Your story is the epitome of glorification of rape. Honestly, it's quite sick.

i really enjoyed reading this from start to end, a well written lemon fic but also with a great relationship building, tho both characters never saidi love you' in the entire chapters but it's ok you've done a great job on maintaining sesshomaru's character and i prefer sesshomaru that way and we all know that sesshomaru was not a man of many words..tho idk if i missed something while reading this story...this question left me thinking about did sesshomaru try to revive his son and daughter with tensaiga? i hope you answer this..so i can sleep peacefully tonight XD...you're an awesome writer i look forward for your next Sesskag fic in the future! Thank you for sharing such wonderful or rather Hot story!

This was indeed a different type of story.. i find it particular in the last paragraph of your story you did mention 'her lover' but in your whole story you never used the 3 words even if it was obvious that Sesshoumaru felt more than what he let on.. well played of emotion building and indirectly letting us know how at least he felt. Kagome always felt like she was happy to be mated loyal, loved sessh but was never in love with him ..uhm i can't say more than other have said it was interested i was hooked .. and in the end it felt more like you were making a summary over their lives - wait i think a reviewer said something similar- you stop letting the story be told .. but all in all you kept me also hooked to the story. Specially in the beginning when seshlumaru learns about her hell of a life ..

Like a previous reader, I did get the sense that this story was meandering around the time Kagome agreed to become Sesshou's mate. I think the fact that the conversation took 5 or so chapters is a big culprit. And after that, it seemed like you were telling us a story instead of allowing the story to be told, if that makes sense.

For the second half of the story, it seemed like the events were being listed off in paragraphs.

Anyway, the premise is interesting. I still don't get why she requested to be raped considering her reputation as a traveling miko would make her seem 'loose' and she was going to be kicked out of the village anyway. That issue seemed forced. Oh, and the ending line about unnecessary toys and add-ons not being present for their coupling in the beginning isn't correct considering he used Bakusaiga's hilt as an impromptu dildo. I think this and Inuyasha's punishment were... questionable for me.

I did enjoy the story because it was different, though. I think I liked your notes a bit more tbh

omg sesshou is such a perv! It's as much as a turn on as it is a turn off. I'm not sure if I should finish the story, but I'll try my best to do so.

This story is vastly different from many I have read. I loved that about it. As well as how you wrote each of the characters. The story was nothing like what I expected and kept me hooked from the beginning. Over all there was very little fluff involved in this piece. Though it was filled with lemony goodness and adversity. Thank you for writing such an amazing piece.