Truly wonderful story you're an amazing writer!

A little mistake: "Gibbs ... met Tony in the waiting room". It's "Tim", I guess :) Anyway, good story!

Great story!

Great story

Haha lol, now Thom(as) Hanks joins the actor party :P

It does but I kinda like it :'D - (my face right now)

Somehow I missed this story when it first appeared, found it when I was reading about thr sequel. Loved this story. I am a sucker for Tony/Gibbs father/son stories. This story was very believable and I am looking forward to reading more.

this was a great story... just a question though before I go on to read the sequel, seeing as I found this story months after it was finished... Tony is partially paralyzed and using a walker, wouldn't have a bedroom upstairs be a bit difficult for him? ..

anyway.. fantastic story... heading to read the sequel

Exciting chapter - I hope Tony is okay and heals fast.

I like the story and I always like some good Tony and Gibbs whumping - but my one critique is that it seems extremely rushed. I feel like I am speed reading when I read it :-) lol I would love to see more detail in each scene which would fix that problem. Thanks.

Wow awesome story I read the sequel first and then this and amazing job.

can't wait to read more and see what happens next between everyone

Really, really fine piece of writing! I forgot you are dyslexic. You do just fine! Spellcheck isn't all it's cracked up to be either. The emotion in your stories is strong and so real!

Love this! Looking forward to the sequel!

Really writing some tough emotional stuff! Great! I am verklempt!