Fantastic! I loved your writing. Ace's POV? Brilliant! Well executed, Loki.

Hell yeah Ace knows what he wants, and I totally wouldn't mind reading about the "convincing" Thatch and Marco will do. Plus I'm curious on exactly how kinky Marco can get.

THIS IS SO GOOD ... AND I AM SO GAY ... holy shit, its just. really well written smut, no questions about it. i don't often seek out smut and i certainly don't get squirmy over it but I Say God Damn, this was excellent. nice flow and vocab and characterization. the dialogue is pretty real, too! party on.

when will you update this? plz do, its really good! and hot:)!

Maaah! I can't wait for the next chapter! This was to good and freakin' way to hot /DD Thanks for these awesome chapter */3/*

oh my XD

WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COME OUTTA HIDING BEFORE I GET BLOODHOUNDS THIS IDEA WILL GO TO WASTE IF YOU DON"T COMPLETE IT!

Oh god, this is exceptionally good! I hope you'll continue with this, I smell a little bit of drama, hahaha. Even though it's almost been a year since the last update, I'll still wait for it :) Cannot wait for the Marco-Thatch showdown haha ;)

Kyaaaaahhhh! Soo hot!

Hey there!

I have to say, this was really awesome! There isn't much ThatchxAce stuff out there, and I really enjoyed this I hope you continue this, it seems like a really fun concept. Are you planning on writing the flashback of how Marco got Ace? xD

Either way, awesome job!

More please update

And here I am again, really, really happy for all the hotness of this chapter. Just awesome! I'm wordless, speechless, either way I'm going to try and give you a decent review.
First of all. I liked this boredom that Ace has and how he likes to get rid of it. It convinced me at least!
How Ace plays his cards to find out who was watching him and the fact that he is not willing to be tied to just one person. I just keep having trouble with this stuff of "Convince me, win me over" I don't like it but that's just me
Final, but not least. It seems you're stuck, how about some fluff? I love how you write and describe the scenes (if you know what I mean ;) but you can't build anything with only that (in relationship I mean). Another idea that came to my mind (but more likely you already though of) how about Marco or Thatch being the bottom one for a change?
Sorry for the long review again :D

Hey! I was looking for some Thatch and Ace fic and found yours! Really nice chapter, I really liked the idea of the three of them together, no jealousy involved and the fact that Ace thinks of himself as someone with no moral. On the other side, he is a pirate, in search of freedom, so why he should stop his search or to limit it? I believe you can find freedom when you look for a different kind of relationship too and not only by traveling. I'm not quite convinced on the "whoever is the more convincing gets me for the night..." I mean if he likes them/love them both it should be up to him to decide or choose, instead of making them compete...
Sorry for the long review, hope it's readable/understandable :D

Damn girl this is hawt! /;/;/ Update please! I l-o-v-e this! Omg, did I just fangirl? Sorry

-MDW

FAN!