This is so beautiful and heart touching. I've already read it 5 times since the first time I read it :)

Aw...that is adorable. Absolutely adorable. I love it. So sad...but so good! with a happy ending!

I adore this! Your writing is spectacular!

I absolutely love all of your Fire emblem awakening one offs, Between has to be my favorite, but this one was a great emotional little read that I very much enjoyed. The Chrom x FeMU pairing is one I stick with through every awakening play through, much more so than any other pairing it makes the most sense logically and dramatically. The trust between the two and the Fallen/Exalt bloodline mixing peaked my interest right from the start. Stories like Plegian queen, and Forever yours are favorites of mine... but your ChromxFeMU stories BY FAR have the most "true to game" personalities for the pair. The stories are well written, and bring to light aspects of the relationship not covered in game that are expanded upon in a interesting way. I'd love to see more FeMU stories from you!

You captured the emotional conflict of these characters perfectly. I love the romance between Robin and Chrom, and I feel like there is so much character depth that goes unexplored in the game (but so much potential for fanfiction!). Wonderful story, and beautiful writing! I look forward to reading more of your writing.

This is so damn CUTE! I mean, this is so similar to Chrono Cross!

Completely utter brilliance, I love this story! I love how you depicted Chrom and Robin's relationship too.

This was an amazing take on the story D I love Chrom X Robin/Avatar this I could see totally fit into the story perfectly
Well written and I love it

That was a very lovely read. I do love the premise, and I do love how you transitioned the scenes. It grasped fully well how you wanted to portray Robin's feelings of fearing for the person she loves most, and how Chrom being the trusting person, and as her husband would act through it all.

The intimate scenes weren't overbearing but really added flavor to the whole premise and to the writing, which is a very good thing. Usually, other writers tend to just add them for the heck of it, but you incorporated it very well to the story.

All in all, the only thing I noticed that made me stop was the "But you should know, if worst comes to worse." Which I would say would have to be worse comes to worst. Other than that, I have no bone to pick with it. I really liked reading it.

Keep writing! :

Ah I'm so happy that you wrote something new! You are such a talented writer! I could feel Robin's pain and suffering but Chrom was there for her! I adore their scenes together, even the super steamy stuff - just beautiful! *sighs* I want my own Chrom, lol. Anyway thank you so much for sharing this awesome story! I look forward to more stories from you! - kuro.

This story is really beautiful and well-written! I wish I could write more mature scenes like this

So much feels. I actually had tears in my eyes. Wonderfully Written. You could just feel the pain Robin was going through. ;w; Wonderful.