Interesting

So did the kaiju go around Vancouver Island to attack Vancouver? Wouldn't it make more sense to have the Shatterdome on the island instead of the Vancouver mainland, or convert the entire island into a defensive base?

At first I thought: Bond and PacificRim? WTF! That will never work!
I like the Craig Bond and I absolutely love PacificRim sooooo... I started reading...
Now, after I finished your incredible story I must say: shame on me! I was wrong with my first tought about this story.
I LOVE IT! It's wonderful, you did a great job mixing the two movies :D
Thank you for left Chuck alive and the two wonderful pairs of lovers/driftpartners.

I enjoyed it more than the movie. Thanks.

Of course I will come back for part 2!

A very interesting first chapter, it was really awesome, I was (am still) obsessed with Pacific Rim, lol, it's also quite amusing that I live in HK

Hey there! Just a brief disclaimer that I'm going into this one completely fandom blind. :)

One thing that I noticed right off the bat was that I was having trouble finding where the story actually began. I'd recommend trying to keep your entire author's note together or just formatting it differently from the rest of the story. Just so that we always know where we are when we're reading. Just a thought. xx

I also thought that you might want to consider expanding on your opening. You talk about how it's a miserable day for the time of the year but then you drop that thread. I think that it would really add to the entire opening if we get something to grab on to immediately as we start reading. You wouldn't need to go into much detail, but showing us why the weather is significant and how it relates to James Bond would really expand everything nicely. Again, just a thought. :)

I really liked the way that you were able to show the characterization for Bond. The flow was very nice, and it gave a lot of important information. That continued very well throughout the entire chapter. I loved the way that we get to see some of the sadness of his life, but we also get to see some of the reasoning, and not all of it so that we have more mysteries to unravel as the story goes on.

Your dialogue was really nice throughout. While I have no idea if it's in character or not, the flow was very natural and it made sense that people would be speaking like that. I was getting an excellent picture of the characters through what they said, and that was nicely done.

Overall, interesting beginning. Good luck on future projects!

Cheers, dearie!

Great job with this story.

Love the story and can't wait for more.

In your case, with your skill at writing, yeah for obsessive writing disorder. :)

Thank you for sharing.

YAY.

:) Giddy with the excitement of it all.

ooh! I am so giddy with each additional chapter. Such a great job you are doing with this. :)

Loving this.

I have seen neither Skyfall nor Pacific Rim, but it is not in any way, shape or form hindering my enjoyment of this story. In fact it may be letting me follow it without any preconcieved notions or inhibitions based on crossover problems.