Wow! This is so amazing and I loved reading it. Keep up the work!

Omg i love this! I felt that you executed this story amazingly :)

Hey, I noticed a few inconsistencies;

1. Sherlock couldn't have 'solved' the Carl Powers case, seeing as he only realised that the boy was poisoned in TGG, at best, Sherlock knew that it wasn't a natural death.

2. Sherlock wouldn't have been living in 221B in the pre-John era, seeing as he only moved in there with him.

I hoped this helped!

I'm enjoying your story! !

This story is brilliant! Amazing! It was great! Don't get down on yourself about the one chapter, it was great, and you were just going through writers block. ;)

Is there a sequel?

Loved this story, although I REALLY hated William, I wanted to kill him so many times for what he did to Sherlock :( anyway, great story, everyone seemed to be in character, looking forward to more stories :)

Yay!

A few spelling and grammatical errors, but over all really good! :) Good job!

Oh my god, I actually cried! This is one of those stories where you just have to pause after reading it because the story and writing are just SO good. This is by far the best fanfic I've ever read, and it belongs in a book. You could become an author, not kidding!

The emotions in here are really raw, you describe John in this situation just as I picture him! Well done!

I shouldn't laugh but hahahahahahaha

Brilliant! I loved it! And thanks fOR MAKING THE ENDING HEARTBREAKING OH MY GOD ARE YOU THE SECOND MOFFAT

You ended the alternate like that... Thanks satan.

Awesome story!