Oh my God, that was harsh. My heart is at my throat as well. I'm impressed by the intense (and devastating) feelings that your story gives off. I haven't been in the SnK fandom for very long, but I have a thorn deep down in my heart since Petra's death. I don't know, but she being pregnant when she died, having decided not to tell Levi, makes sence for me (still heart-breaking though). I loved your little but tragic shot.

Naya.

I've been reading the summary for so long I immediately recognize it haha. This is the first time I've managed to be brave enough to at least read through and instead of merely taking note before moving on. Ouch. Anger first before any kind of mourning. Because that's is just the way he is and he definitely won't break down in public.

Nope. Nope. Nope.
My heart got destroyed. I cannot feel anything. This is what happens when you search for Rivetra.

perfect so sad though

I died because of this..again... X''(

I DIDN'T ASK FOR MY HEART TO BE CRUSHED LIKE THIS. All of the raw emotion from tho piece just come to life and it's really expressive and I really like this.

Just as I was beginning to think Rivetra couldn't have had a more tragic ending, I stumble across this. T.T

This ... this could have SO easily happened in the manga / anime. Probably a good thing it didn't. I don't think this side of the fandom could have handled it. But still, it's so beautifully written! And so devastatingly heart-wrenching. New head-canon, me thinks.

Oh, Levi ...

*snif* Hear this? It's the sound of my heart breaking. DX

I don't ship them, I don't ship them, I don't ship them... Oh gosh, this is hopeless DX Why did you have to do this? I tried so hard not to like any character/pairing too much while watching/reading this series and narrowly avoided this one but alas I made the entirely masochistic decision of reading this. Anyways... Very very well done on writing this piece of art and you've all the characters spot-on. Despite Levi's outward lack of emotions, I believe that he is very much affected by the deaths going on around him and I really liked your portrayal of him in this. Thanks for sharing! :)

this was absolutely heartbreaking
and his dream is just sad and unreachable and sighs

My heart...
HOW DARE YOU WRITE THIS. It was amazing though. I have a personal headcanon that Petra was pregnant when she died and neither of them knew. I'm still upset over her and Squad Levi's deaths...but great job on this one-shot! It was really heart-breaking but very tragically beautiful :)

I found your another amazing story. It's really touching and beautiful. Very well done!

I was reading this during lunch at school and then I just started crying bUT THATS OK BECAUSE THIS IS SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN

This is excellently written. Great job!

now this is the best way to drain out my tears. this story is heartbreakingly beautiful and i love it!